Vignette 1 : A Step Forward ...

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Janani

@Satrupa

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

It s simply Awesm dear. 👏👏👏 i just love ur writing!! its just superb!!

Got permission and gonna open a thread for all these FF/OS/SS stories in our forum, pls do add all ur stories link over there!!! love reading it again, whenever i get freetym.

Edited by JananiKiDeewani - 10 years ago

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poetic

@poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: JananiKiDeewani
It s simply Awesm dear. 👏👏👏 i just love ur writing!! its just superb!!

Got permission and gonna open a thread for all these FF/OS/SS stories in our forum, pls do add all ur stories link over there!!! love reading it again, whenever i get freetym.

Thanks Hema.😊

I think it's a good idea to open the thread. All our stories will be saved together.

Edited by poetic - 10 years ago

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basket_101

@basket_101

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Okay so I have no excuse to be this late, except that I was just royally wasting time in the past few days

😆

Anywayyy

I finally read this

At first, I was a little skeptic of the situation, thinking what happened

And then when I read Pam asked Ragini to make non-veg food despite her being veg, I thought maybe that was the reason

- which by the way, I feel like is such a Pam thing to 🤢 I don't understand why you would want to torture the person your sibling loves -_-

Anyway, then I thought - why was Neil in such a bad mood

And then we find out the actual reason

Oh my gosh.

It's just a story, but my heart dropped.

I absolutely loved the way Nachiket stood by Ragini. I would have slapped him otherwise... and that's just where my wrath would begin 😆

But the scenes which followed next were amazing.

Really loved it!

Especially the end!!

He needs to take a stand.

I loved the whole concept!

A step forward to a better future :')

Great job!!! 😃

I want either a continuation or another story 😉

Take careee

Hinal 😳

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poetic

@poetic

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: basket_101
Okay so I have no excuse to be this late, except that I was just royally wasting time in the past few days
😆

Anywayyy
I finally read this

At first, I was a little skeptic of the situation, thinking what happened
And then when I read Pam asked Ragini to make non-veg food despite her being veg, I thought maybe that was the reason
- which by the way, I feel like is such a Pam thing to 🤢 I don't understand why you would want to torture the person your sibling loves -_-
Anyway, then I thought - why was Neil in such a bad mood

And then we find out the actual reason
Oh my gosh.
It's just a story, but my heart dropped.

I absolutely loved the way Nachiket stood by Ragini. I would have slapped him otherwise... and that's just where my wrath would begin 😆

But the scenes which followed next were amazing.
Really loved it!
Especially the end!!

He needs to take a stand.

I loved the whole concept!

A step forward to a better future :')

Great job!!! 😃
I want either a continuation or another story 😉

Take careee
:D
Hinal 😳

Thanks a lot Hinal. 😆

I personally find Pam very interfering, irrespective of everything else. And yes, the idea stemmed from the fact that Nachiket really needs to take a step and stop further mistakes from happening.

There will be a short second part to wrap this off. Maybe sometime during he weekend. 😳

Meanwhile, waiting for the next one from you.

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basket_101

@basket_101

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: poetic
Thanks a lot Hinal. 😆

I personally find Pam very interfering, irrespective of everything else. And yes, the idea stemmed from the fact that Nachiket really needs to take a step and stop further mistakes from happening.

There will be a short second part to wrap this off. Maybe sometime during he weekend. 😳

Meanwhile, waiting for the next one from you.

:P You're welcomee!

She really is :/ I don't understand how he is still putting up with her. Yes she played the role of a mother to his kids, but that doesn't mean she can run his life.

His character, at first, appeared to be so strong. But lately, he's like a bheegi billi. Honestly that is my opinion of him when he lets Pam say whatever she wants.

Ughhh

And oh cool :D

No wonder it's Vignette 1 😃

Say word, I'm working on it as I write here :D

I also want to write a piece where I show a normal day at the Khanna household after reading yours :P Dekhte hai. I have a couple of unfinished stories I need to finish off.

So perhaps after that 😳

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poetic

@poetic

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Yeah, I kind of have lots of ideas. But I just hate typing.

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basket_101

@basket_101

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

*Waits patiently*

😆

So I realize you hate typing

But you've got to write the next bit!!

That too sooon

Waaaiiiting!! 😛

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poetic

@poetic

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: basket_101

*Waits patiently*
😆

So I realize you hate typing
But you've got to write the next bit!!
That too sooon

Waaaiiiting!! 😛

have posted a new Vignette today Hinal , called Marasim.

Do let me know. 😆