NeiRa OS--Change ~Updated part 2 on page 6~ - Page 2

Originally posted by: poetic

Oh Surbhi, you definitely need to write more and continue this.

My poor heart skipped a beat❤️

This is just so fabulous. Absolutely what the Dr ordered.

Thanks alot poetic! Your comment is overwhelming as i have read your writeups and well they all are freaking awesome!
Thankyou!

Originally posted by: RonitPallaviNR

This was perfect!!! I agree with Sukhs and Rachna, you have to write more.. It would be a crime of you dont.

This was beautiful and yes i had a smile plastered on my face the entire time I was reading this. Fab job! ❤️

Oh thankyou so very much! Haha i don't want to be a criminal lol but will come up with something else for sure :)
I am glad you liked it, thanks again!

Originally posted by: sweetfari

Awww <3 <3 beautifully written

please continue soon :) and make weekended bearable

loved it :)

Thankyou so much sweetfari! Well i don't know about continuing this one but i will come up with something else for sure :)

Originally posted by: _Meena_

wonderful os!

Thanks alot meena :)

Originally posted by: san2471

Very nice very real...

Thankyou so much i am glad that you could relate to it :)

Nice1.I loved last scene most.

Originally posted by: abcd89

very nice keep writing more

Thankyou so much :)

Originally posted by: zainabawoon

Surbhi! Awesome OS yaar!!! It was cute and sweet!❤️Loved how ragini could not stop thinking about nachiket back in her apartmentthe way she mistook him for the paanwala and their cute nokjhoks🤣the bus scene, nachiket's care, the way he covered her with that blanket and the way his heart filled with peace and contentment as he watched her adoringly sleep in peace❤️just loved it yaar!

Aww thankyou so much zainabawoon! I am all smiling after reading your comment :)) I am glad that you loved it!
This idea just came into my mind and i kept on writing it :)

Originally posted by: lourel24

Nice1.I loved last scene most.

Thankyou so much for commenting lourel :) Its good to see you here!

Hi there
This is so interesting you have very good writing skills please continue can't wait for updates. 😉