NeiRa OS--Change ~Updated part 2 on page 6~

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goldstar678

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Wonderful wonderful OS,really loved the way you described those thoughts which are hitting Ragini again and again.

Thanks for this.

Edited by goldstar678 - 10 years ago

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blokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Thank you so much Surabhi for your message and OS- it was lovely!

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surbhimathur

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: goldstar678
Wonderful wonderful OS,really loved the way you described those thoughts which are hitting Ragini again and again.

Thanks for this.

Thankyou so much for commenting and appreciating! I am glad that you liked it :)

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: blokes
Thank you so much Surabhi for your message and OS- it was lovely!

Its all my pleasure! Thankyousomuch for commenting :)
Means alot!

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surbhimathur

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Thankyou so much for your amazing response! I am so touched, this short update is just for you people :)
I hope you like it!
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Update ~2~

Since they entered karan and dimpy's farmhouse, their was no looking behind. Even pam was actively participating in the preparations as she suddenly realized its her brother's daughter who is getting married after all! Sunny tai was taking care of the eating arrangements, aarav was having fun with agham, ashaben was looking after jignesh's grandmother and nishi jignesh were busy having their own mushy talks.
Amidst all the chaos going on nachiket was in the room, keeping his suitcase.
"Phew, finally!" And he kept both of his hands on his waist to examine the area.
Nothing has really changed, it didn't took him long to realise that it used to be 'Their' room when they used to come and visit here. Those memories which they created, were special, he still remembered how he would stare her for hours when she would sleep in his arms. Those pretty mornings and exherting nights. He chuckled while remembering one moment they had spent together here in the room.

Flashback--
He was combing his hair standing infront of the mirror, they had come for a much needed holiday in the farmhouse with karan and dimpy. It was early morning and they had a beautiful night together.
Ragini opened her eyes slowly when she didn't find him on the bed, he was standing in front of the mirror, his back was facing her and well he was shirtless.
"You look more beautiful in my shirt" he winked at her in the mirror.
She blushed deeper seeing him.
"I never saw this side of yours ragini, you knocked me out yesterday" he said and her cheeks changed their color from pink to beetroot red as she knew he was pointing at those red marks on his back.
She threw a pillow on him and got up to freshen up. She was going towards the washroom and within seconds she found herself on the bed as his naughty husband demanded for a morning kiss!
"Nachiket please let me get ready" she tried to get up but he had tightened his grip around her waist.
"No...first give me my kiss" he demanded by advancing towards her slowly.
Ragini was helpless, there was no way she could escape so she quickly gave a peck on his lips but their passion made it too long to finish and at the end they were gasping for air.
"Now bye!" She got up to go.

*Knock Knock*
"Nachiket! Ragini! Where are you guys?" Dimpy and karan yelled standing at their door.
Ragini frowned "Nachiket go open the door"
Nachiket pointed at his upper portion and smirked "Like this?"
Ragini looked at him "No no wear something please!"
Nachiket "But you are wearing my shirt"
Ragini glared at him "There are many in the cupboard please wear one of them and open the door!"
Nachiket "No i want to wear this one only!" And he smiled victoriously.
Ragini mumbled something under her breath, went into the washroom while banging the door and then threw the shirt at him.
He smiled and wore it. He opened the door and found his friends glaring at him.
"Where the hell were you?"
"Do i need to say anything where were we?"
Karan and dimpy understood and went while saying we are waiting downstairs come soon!
Nachiket turned and found that ragini forgot to lock the door behind. He smirked and entered quietly, and before she could realize it, he was there standing behind her.

"Sir yeh raha aapka room..."
Ragini entered inside the room unaware of his presence...but as soon as her gaze fell on him, she went silent. He was right there infont of her, sitting quietly. Their eyes met and she skipped a heartbeat, he slowly stood up and said "Sorry, i didn't realize that now this room belongs to Dr. Aman"
His words worked as a dagger for her heart and then she saw him going out with his luggage.
Something pinched her in the heart after seeing his eyes, she could tell he was thinking about them, this room had brought so many memories fresh in her mind, how she wanted to go and hug him tight right now! She regretted that she didn't saw him sitting inside the room. She knew that the mention of Dr. Aman does the same to him as to what nivedita's does to her.
She closed her eyes and let out a deep breath while Dr. aman entered inside the room. Confused

Edited by surbhimathur - 10 years ago

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Sam

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Loved it!! Waiting on the new part...jaldi karo!! :)

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basket_101

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Surbhi!! :)

This week is excruciatingly painful, so I shall comment on both parts together (when you update it 😉 ) :D

Take careee

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surbhimathur

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: RonitPallaviNR
Loved it!! Waiting on the new part...jaldi karo!! :)

Thankyou! Wait over :)
*Updated*

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surbhimathur

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: basket_101
Surbhi!! :)
This week is excruciatingly painful, so I shall comment on both parts together (when you update it 😉 ) :D

Take careee
<3

Haha i understand its okay!
I too updated after doing some work, now upcoming days are crucial for me too!
Tc u too :)