Surbhi!! :)
Now I'm back here to comment ^_^
So coming to the first part.
That was beautiful!
From the start to the end.
I connected with the whole story, and could feel the emotions just running through me.
It was really well written!
I especially loved the ending <333333
I am so glad you came back to writing, because you are amazing!!!
Part 2:
OMG ☺️
"You knocked me out yesterday"
and then Ragini's blushing
😆 Oh that was so beautiful!
Honestly loooved it!
The end was sad :( I'm glad at least she knows that hearing Dr. Aman from her does the same to him as hearing Nivedita does to her. I think that was very well written, and I'm so glad you included it!
I do hope we will be treated to another part ^_^
In fact, you can even make it a SS or a FF 😆
Maybe I'm getting too selfish 😛
But I'm really enjoying the story so would love to read more!
Good luck for the upcoming days :)
Take care and keep writing <3
Love,
Hinal 🤗
CID
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
