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Ragini Joshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

Wowww!!!!!👏👏 That ws awsum n sooo beautiful...Neira are super cute! Just lovd how nachiket teased ragini😆😆😆

I hope we get to see smthing like this in the show..in real ha! Not in flashbacks😳

😆 i knw i m stupid!!! But u r awsum! Pls pls write more!

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sosweetsumi

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Posted: 10 years ago

lovely stroy please do continue
bye sumi

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Sam

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Posted: 10 years ago

That was sexy, cute, painful all those things together. They make me sad! You write really well. Good job!

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poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

Surbhi, this is really nice. Please continue at the earliest.

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roneeta

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Posted: 10 years ago

Wow - that was hot! :D

And made for a super read, Surabhi! Write more soon!! :D

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basket_101

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Posted: 10 years ago

Surbhi!! :)

Now I'm back here to comment ^_^

So coming to the first part.

That was beautiful!

From the start to the end.

I connected with the whole story, and could feel the emotions just running through me.

It was really well written!

I especially loved the ending <333333

I am so glad you came back to writing, because you are amazing!!!

Part 2:

OMG ☺️

"You knocked me out yesterday"

and then Ragini's blushing

😆 Oh that was so beautiful!

Honestly loooved it!

The end was sad :( I'm glad at least she knows that hearing Dr. Aman from her does the same to him as hearing Nivedita does to her. I think that was very well written, and I'm so glad you included it!

I do hope we will be treated to another part ^_^

In fact, you can even make it a SS or a FF 😆

Maybe I'm getting too selfish 😛

But I'm really enjoying the story so would love to read more!

Good luck for the upcoming days :)

Take care and keep writing <3

Love,

Hinal 🤗

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