COMPLETE|ArShi SS:If I Were You Just For A Day (Sheetal Track)| - Page 15

Originally posted by: Kiddo_Star

Oopsie!!! Seems like I am the last one to comment, am I?

Pls pls pls let it be nooo 😭 I am sorry for being this late. But can't help with the studies and assignments.

Coming to the update. I loved it. I loved it thoroughly. I just wish yo go back to the start of Page 16 and once again start reading the update and then do it once again and then once again.

It was mind blowing, awesome, superb, perfect, best, amazing, attractive and what not. Each and every though of Arnav and Khushi were so beautifully described didu.

Not even a single time it seemed that any of the one lacked in showing any expected reaction. You did the most amazing job where u wrote of Arnav's ego. His ego is the most harmful thing in everything. Come what may but Arnav's ego was ways up so high which always ended him into hurting Khushi.

For the first time, Khushi din care abt the repercussions and voiced her thoughts out. Khushi is once again being selfless. She knows how much Arnav hates tears into eyes and so she din cry in front of him. She din let him know how broken she was. and that is also a negative point for Arnav. Even after being in love for a few months and being married for over 6-7 months, Arnav still stays the same angry which scares Khushi from opening herself or letting herself out in front of him. Arnav should notice this change and try changing it.

If he can misunderstand Khushi for having an affair with Shyam, then why can't she doubt him or his relation with Sheetal in past? Even after knowing his thoughts abt marriage before marrying her. Just wanna know more and more abt this story didu.

and pls if I am online do let me know yaar. I'd be glad to be the first one.

But yaar I LOVE YOU SO SO SOOO MUCH DIDU! MUAHHH!!!!

Love,

Yours,

Munchkins

Originally posted by: lechuarshi

late hogayi re😕😕

Khushi babes rockzz...she with a brave smile knock some sense in that Shaatir Dimaag...

That simple question...He realized his mistakes...tadaaa...

khushi ki dialogue simi ki dimaag...hum sab ki expectations..😆😆..

His meant Nothing EX flame with Single mother status...her son act, sleep, behave lyk Arnav, with some hidden agenda/feelings for Arnav...She questioned just simply...

I clearly remeber after Arnav told her sheetal meant nothing to him...during some breakfast..he clearly remember Sheetal was allergic to some food..WOW..Meant nothing..But What a sharp memory regarding such a small details of his ex..We audience were not fool lyk other shows where they can add whatever shit in story lines...😡😡😡..stupid CV🤬...

if they dont know what to write next after the exit of shyam babu..Pls hum fans se poocho..if only they visited IF😉

we understand..whatever happens in past should remain in past...we cant change that...

Unlike Arnav Khushi have full right to question him...shit was his ex

bcuz Shyam and khushi were not in any relationship...(that forced and fake engagement is not a relation bas😆😆)

What a khadak question..

what goes around, comes around..

khushi is the youngest in the family...( forget Laxmi for now😆😆)

But no one in that stupid family are mature, selfless and so good lyk her..( even Nani disappointed me)

I love reading the poems

Next Update ki intezaar mein

Go Khushi go!!!!!

Originally posted by: ..KittyKat..

When will you update ji?

Originally posted by: Simi1711

Most likely to update this tomorrow sweets :)

Good one simi! Khushi had shown arnav the mirror! Now he has come in terms of reality of what happens when your past creates hurdles in your present. Beautifully written. And i love this khushi who doesnt shy away from seeking answers to the questions that has been bugging her from long! She made it clear that she is not as childlike or immature as he had thought her to be! Now coming to sheetal, the family has come to know of her true colours which didn't require any other proof!
Ab next update jaldi karo sweety!

too gud smitz. :-)

Originally posted by: Simi1711

Most likely to update this tomorrow sweets :)

The woman has power in her gait,



But, in this,

I'm not a great poetry writer but this is all I could do... I hope its somewhere near nice, I hope, you always inspire me to write and this is what you get. :) ilu. :*