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lechuarshi

@lechuarshi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#121

late hogayi re😕😕

Khushi babes rockzz...she with a brave smile knock some sense in that Shaatir Dimaag...

That simple question...He realized his mistakes...tadaaa...

khushi ki dialogue simi ki dimaag...hum sab ki expectations..😆😆..

His meant Nothing EX flame with Single mother status...her son act, sleep, behave lyk Arnav, with some hidden agenda/feelings for Arnav...She questioned just simply...

I clearly remeber after Arnav told her sheetal meant nothing to him...during some breakfast..he clearly remember Sheetal was allergic to some food..WOW..Meant nothing..But What a sharp memory regarding such a small details of his ex..We audience were not fool lyk other shows where they can add whatever shit in story lines...😡😡😡..stupid CV🤬...

if they dont know what to write next after the exit of shyam babu..Pls hum fans se poocho..if only they visited IF😉

we understand..whatever happens in past should remain in past...we cant change that...

Unlike Arnav Khushi have full right to question him...shit was his ex

bcuz Shyam and khushi were not in any relationship...(that forced and fake engagement is not a relation bas😆😆)

What a khadak question..

what goes around, comes around..

khushi is the youngest in the family...( forget Laxmi for now😆😆)

But no one in that stupid family are mature, selfless and so good lyk her..( even Nani disappointed me)

I love reading the poems

Next Update ki intezaar mein

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sonali

@Sonalikarhi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#122

hey...loved it...loved this khushi ...innocent yet strong...arnav and raizada family now know the real khushi...what she is going through...loved it.

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roopathomas

@roopathomas

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#123

Different take on the worst track of ipk... Looks good n I hope it comes out good bringing out justice to khushi.

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Moumita

@_Oorja_

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#124

May we have a round of applause for this outstanding piece

Oh, she showed the mighty Raizada mirror alright and how!

Kudos Khushi.

Yes, she got hurt, maybe broke beyond you can imagine, maybe she cried a river and her agony roared in silence yet she for once gave back what she got in kind. And I salute that spirit of this Khushi and off corse you who made that happen.

Keep going, baby... I am in love with this FF already

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kshubhangi

@kshubhangi

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#125

Arnav needed this and he deserves it for all his HARVARD BRAIN.

Superb chapter.

I like the poems here and also in your previous story. Is it your creation?

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: kshubhangi
Arnav needed this and he deserves it for all his HARVARD BRAIN.
Superb chapter.
I like the poems here and also in your previous story. Is it your creation?

Thank you!

Yes, the poems too are a part of my creative work. I had mentioned this during my prev. Story Cruise Adriana.😊

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#127

Awesome update

I like that Khushi showed him the true image of their relationship and where they actually stand. Khushi and Arnav love each other because there are double standards and unequality in their relationship which is injustice for one and another at times.

What I love most that Khushi made Arnav remember all the misery Khushi faced in those horrible six months without being at fault and due to his judgements. I never had chance to see that in drama, it's true one can be selfless but no one can forget the past and it always come up.

Looking forward to read more.

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Shamz

@Shamz94

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#128

One word and that is
Wwwooowwweww. 👏

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shalbi

@shalbi

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#129

I really like the way Khushi is standing or herself, she isn't being rebellious but just asking a few things that others should have noticed too and shouldn't have taken her forgiving nature for granted, she is also a human fir gods sake..

Continue soon

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1029751

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#130

Oopsie!!! Seems like I am the last one to comment, am I?

Pls pls pls let it be nooo 😭 I am sorry for being this late. But can't help with the studies and assignments.

Coming to the update. I loved it. I loved it thoroughly. I just wish yo go back to the start of Page 16 and once again start reading the update and then do it once again and then once again.

It was mind blowing, awesome, superb, perfect, best, amazing, attractive and what not. Each and every though of Arnav and Khushi were so beautifully described didu.

Not even a single time it seemed that any of the one lacked in showing any expected reaction. You did the most amazing job where u wrote of Arnav's ego. His ego is the most harmful thing in everything. Come what may but Arnav's ego was ways up so high which always ended him into hurting Khushi.

For the first time, Khushi din care abt the repercussions and voiced her thoughts out. Khushi is once again being selfless. She knows how much Arnav hates tears into eyes and so she din cry in front of him. She din let him know how broken she was. and that is also a negative point for Arnav. Even after being in love for a few months and being married for over 6-7 months, Arnav still stays the same angry which scares Khushi from opening herself or letting herself out in front of him. Arnav should notice this change and try changing it.

If he can misunderstand Khushi for having an affair with Shyam, then why can't she doubt him or his relation with Sheetal in past? Even after knowing his thoughts abt marriage before marrying her. Just wanna know more and more abt this story didu.

and pls if I am online do let me know yaar. I'd be glad to be the first one.

But yaar I LOVE YOU SO SO SOOO MUCH DIDU! MUAHHH!!!!

Love,

Yours,

Munchkins