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Saraa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: Simi1711

It can never be crappy hon!
And I'm so very happy that I could manage to inspire you to write, because U really are amazing babe! ❤️

Arey! Not just me, you will inspire many others to write if you keep writing like this...

Ya I know I'm amazing!🤣

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Saraa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: Suchi_ASR
awesum poem kittykat 👏
simi's poems always inspire to write sum ourselves...even i agree...😃

Thanks suchi! 😃

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1076334

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Posted: 9 years ago

#163

iam glad that finally would be out of their lives for good.

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WanieA

@WanieA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#164

ur poems...are mind blowing and ur story..its simply soul binding.

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gprs

@gprs

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Posted: 9 years ago

#165

Good..he realizes his own actions now and he knows how painful it is to prove your love..wow..I love khushi..her words are so powerful..it made a great impact...

Your poems are great..they always inspiring and giving good support to the background

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Saraa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#166

While I write this I remember a song, not exactly written for women but it contains a glimpse of the story, it is "Just Like Fire" by Fire.

It is the women who need to realise their potential to go to plaves they habe never been before. They need to get up and break free from the shackles of the boundaries created my their loved ones. And Khushi is doing exactly that, that too, without upsetting her loved ones.

I'm glad that Arnav now realises that he can't take people for granted anymore. They have feelings too. They do so only when they are kind enough to ignote your mistakes. No wonder every child is a spoild brat is front of their parents.😆

Its a life lesson for Arnav, he will never belittle anyone from now, especially his own wife. I was very appalled when they showed him belittling Khushi for her status. And from on,he will say no such thing to anyone.

As per Khushi is concerned, she is just like firework. She just need a little spark and she will shine bright in the sky.

I'm glad she wants to do something on her own and I want to know what will be Arnav's reaction when he will she rr successful,will his male ego speak or his love?

Love,

Saraa

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Moumita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#167

What a blow for Arnav?!

For he thought, he would give her a post in his company even she is not exactly qualified for it and make a start at winning her heart again when someone else from nowhere took his chance and also showed him that if he is late to understand his beloved's worth then that does not no one else does.

And as they say, we act as the person we are and think that that's the way I am and people need to understand rather than wanting us to change. But when someone shows the mirror to us we don't really like the reflection we see in it and then the change comes itself from within, but sometimes it's little too late.

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1029751

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Posted: 9 years ago

#168

Oh My God!!! Didu this was such an awesome and amazing update yaar. Hadn't imagined any of this.

U really come up with something new and unexpected 👏

As I always say u r the best and even more if it is possible.

The thoughts u had shown are beautifully conveyed.

One scene reminded me of IPK - Ek Jashn Epi-1. The part where Arnav thinks of making Khushi head and wooing her reminded me of how Arnav had thought of decorating the whole house and bringing gifts and all and wooing Khushi 😆

Remember Khushi's scary msg? 😡 🤣

Loved that Khushi decided to stand up on her own feet and be independent. Thank God she din want to be in fashion world. She was always amazing in cooking and this is what's the best for her. Hope Arnav does something soon before he loses Khushi more. Where are Payal & Aakash? I am missing them yaar..

And pls pls pls update soon didu. Can't wait anymore. And that Sheetal 😡 I hate her.

Love you,

Yours,

Munchkin

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nisha_mehta

@nisha_mehta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#169

Wow...awesome update.

Arnav is in for more shocks...first nani and Anjali finding out that sheetal is his ex girlfriend and then khushi surprising him with her idea and aims to becoming a chef.

He is left feeling extremely guilty... with a deep sense of loss...of losing his khushi.

Continue soon