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Santhi

@Pindborg

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Nice chapter. Please add me pm list

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shruti

@shruti46

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+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

The picture you created was beautiful..Midnight a lonely arnav ..who.recently bought Sheesh mahal..
and a girl...its so intriguing to.read that thimgs happens like this .

Most common guess she left her payal.continue soon..

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just4this

@just4this

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Hello dear
Nice start beautifully written.
Thank u
Pls pm me and I am sending a buddy request pls accept.
Thank u once again.

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KtotheM

@KtotheM

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Very interesting start
It's seems like a beautiful fairy tale with the midnight scene
Eagerly waiting to know how the story unfolds
Thanks for telling me about it :)

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Suchi

@ChitraF

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Beautiful.. want to read more..

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ananya321

@ananya321

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

i am wondering what khushi has left for arnav ... and my guess is payal ... but we have to wait for another updates or two to find out what it was.. although i do also also want to know why khushi was wandering on arnav's property so freely... again the same answer .. we have to wait for another few updates to find out that too ...

i have not read any of your stories till now but have heard about them ... and now got a chance to read one ... looking forward to next update...

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

A beautiful start.

When i was reading about the mysterious girl, i imagine cindrella in her place. Like Cindrella, the mysterious girl manage to catch the attention of someone like ASR and when the clock strike 12, she ran away, leaving no clue who she was and making Arnav helpless and curious.

Can't wait to read

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Intriguing start.. well interested to know what have she left behind as a proof for Arnav that what he have seen is a reality.. but what was the girl doing in his garden at midnight.. well eager know more about her and her reasons to be in Arnav's property at midnight? loved the start. best wishes and happy writing 😃

thanks Rasgulla_sp for sharing the link of this wonderful story. 😃