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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

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Posted: 9 years ago

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I want to talk about what a yummy image ASR makes standing by the tall windows at night looking at the garden below.

I want to speculate about what his troubled past is. Is his past a reference from the show???

I want to ask you what Khushi's deal is. Why is she fooling around at night in Arnav's property?

But mostly I am wondering, what has this Cinderella left behind for her Prince Charming? 😳

PS: Sirf thanks se kaam nahi chalega title dene k liye. Gift bhi chahiye mujhe 😈

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Sadh123

@Sadh123

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Posted: 9 years ago

Due to my personal connection with Midnight, I entered this thread and God I am not complaining. Your 'I'll be Watching You' has been on my to read list since long and now I can't wait to be a part of this story which is intriguing and promising on many levels.

So, the Arnav of the show is here? He feels lonely and there we get her girl. Wow! Is that Khushi? I am positive it is her. And he has seen her and their eyes have spoken that tale of passion or love already.. oh maybe she was the guardian of this place until Arnav had come in? Or maybe she lived here.. And yeah maybe the watchman does know her.. that explains why she wasn't stopped!

And now what did Arnav see? Maybe her scarf or her Payal or her footprints! I can't think of anything else he would have seen.. Or maybe the flowers?

I am highly intrigued and can't wait for the next part.. your unnamed title did crack me up since I do have a friend who was equally confused about titles!!! 😆

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deepthi

@deepsdspeed

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

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Nice start.. Waiting for the next update..

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

Wow... I have read your previous story and it was awesome...never had I expected you to be writing more...and how thankful am I !!!
Awesome beginning... I wonder what she was doing in the garden... sounds mystical and mysterious... What a start.. and arnav made for a great picture standing at the window...at midnight...heavy hearted
I am so waiting for the next part..
And thanks to rasgulla ji for recommending the story. :)

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littlemissstar

@littlemissstar

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

That's an interesting start
Soo glad to read your work .
Do you have an index?

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MDTharun

@MDTharun

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Interesting start

Curious to know what will happen next

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mahrusweety

@mahrusweety

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

beautiful interesting story.
loving the concept.
will be waiting for next update.

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silvercloud1980

@silvercloud1980

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

Loved the starting . I believe Khushi has left her Payal or her shawl. U have made it sound like a Cinderalla story.Plz pm me for the next update.

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shakrobaaj

@shakrobaaj

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

First of all Thank You Saiyu for sharing this story's link.

Dear writerji...
I loved the start. Believe me I fell in love with this story already. This part is beautifully written and it was like I was watching a short movie. Please continue soon.

Please do share your previous work's link too. I would like to read your work.

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BSRaizada

@BSRaizada

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

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Spl Tq to Saiyu for d recommendation !
I must say, seems to be a v gripping story! Why khushi was wondering late nite at sheesh mahal? Is she some one supernatural or normal human being??:)
I'm adding u! Plz accept n pm me for future updates!

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