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Sadh123

@Sadh123

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Hmm more twists!! I am still guessing what the fellow skipped into his pockets.. So this means it wasn't her footprints or her slippers.. Payal is still on the run.. it wasn't the flower too.. her bracelet or something? But I don't guess this has anything to do with Arnav and Khushi's past relation for Arnav would have easily guessed it..not her scarf too I guess..

So, we have a very sweet Payal here and that step mom, I hate her already!!!.. she is treating her like a maid, on the literal sense..

So, what is this past? Maybe both loved each other or it hadn't even gotten till that and this step mom nipped it off? Glad to know Arnav too hates her! How come Akash hasn't seen Khushi? So, she was always hidden then..

Questions and questions.. but you are containing the surprise well.. And don't worry.. you will do absolutely great with this story and I am loving it La! <3

Edited by Sadh123 - 9 years ago

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ajeetha

@abivicky86

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#52

vow just loving this story

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deepthi

@deepsdspeed

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Nice update. .so arnav knows khushi in childhood? And he is angry on the lady for doing something!! To khushi? Waiting for the next update. .

Edited by deepsdspeed - 9 years ago

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tanu_15

@tanu_15

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Loved it

So dey r childhood frnds...

Khushi payal relation is good ...

Hating d step mother ...

Looking frwd to hw arnav is going to make khushi his...

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anjs

@anjs

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

lovely story, a bit like cinderalla, but with a refreshing twist...wud love to read along the updates

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sammymas

@sammymas

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#56

waw...arnav and khushi share a relation in past.

good update,

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Wonderful update
Loved it
Well written
Plz continue soon
Thanks for the pm

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BSRaizada

@BSRaizada

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Whatever I wanted to comment, Saiyu (rasgulla-sp) already wrote! So ditto!! :)

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Amazing part.. so ARSHI knows each other.. Arnav hates Khushi's step mother and he did recognised Khushi once again.. well very interesting.. loved the update..

thanks for pm 😊