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FeistyDewdrop

@FeistyDewdrop

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Was it her payal that Khushi left behind?

Looking forward to yet another promising Arnav-Khushi story :))

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#42

interesting update.. waiting to read more..

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rizib

@rizib

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Interesting.

Does she work for the Mahal? Is she someone who used to know him in the past? Curious..

So he found the scarf. Will he be able to recognize his midnight visitor when he sees her in the daylight? Maybe the eyes??

Will be waiting for the next update.

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l.o.v.e.

@l.o.v.e.

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Wow!such a beautiful start...loved it...hope it's not her sandal though ;p ...plz pm me if possible ...love to read more...

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zayana khan

@zayana123

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Nice start...Eagerly waiting 4 the next part...

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Jennahdafrin

@Jennahdafrin

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Nice start. Arnav is sleepless in his old home and he meets his 'Khushi' in the middle of the night. Well you didn't specify that it is Khushi. Count me in as your new reader. I love those who update regularly.

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Interesting concept...seems to be a very gripping story. So, what our Cinderella left is it a payal or a scarf... for our Rajkumar😉. The picture you created was beautiful...curious to read more.

Special thanks to Saiyu for giving us the link for your story.

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momoahmd

@momoahmd

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#48

woww...

its a beautiful start...

left me wondering whats the mystery...

continue soon...

thanks for letting me know...

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sammymas

@sammymas

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Good start like a small cindrella story...looking forward

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#50

Res:

Edited:

Evil step-mother but good step sister. Small mercies...

Instead of at the end of the story, our Cinderella has left her accessory at the start of the story. I am sure it is her payal. IPK tradition hai for Khushi to leave her payal behind and for Arnav to pocket it 😳

Par yeh kya... Arnav Khushi knew each other? At a time when he wasnt a Raizada??? Childhood friends? Coz Khushi doesnt recognize the surname of the new owners which Arnav is currently going by. Aakash too says no one would recognize Arnav now... Khushi thinks of a him which has to be him only!

Toh ee Cinderella and Prince Charming past main history share karat rahey?? Tells tells!

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