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Sweety012345

@Sweety012345

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Looks like an interesting story. So please PM when you update.

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Pearl_Oyster

@Pearl_Oyster

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Hey,

So I just stumbled upon this thread all by my own. By sheer chance of good luck! (See what I am doing here?) ;)

And I am so glad I found this thread.
This story of years is so beautifully woven that I am already in love with it.I loved the way you described the emptiness that Arnav feels within and I am very sure this girl who magically appeared before his eyes is Khushi and she would fill that emptiness. <3

By the way, did I tell you I think you're an amazingly awesome writer?

I have had the chance to read your previous stories and they all were oh so lovely!

I am eager to read more of this.And thanks a lot for posting this.

I cannot tell you how happy I am to see you posting this story.. I gotta learn some persuasion tricks from Saiyu.. :D

Seven blessings to her for making you post this. Do tell her I extend my sincere gratitude to her .Now... UPDATE SOON, lady!!! :P

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canapoem

@canapoem

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Lavanya, you did not tell me you are starting a new story.

I went to Saiyeeda's thread and got the link to come here.

Anyways, what an awesome start. Oh, I could so imagine Arnav standing by the window and watching the garden below and suddenly a girl come running there. Amazing sense of imagination.

So much of pain in Arnav's heart, yet his heart could connect to the pain in Khushi's heart.

Now eager to know more about them.

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Hey came to your story as it was recommended by another IF writer and I must agree that the beginning sounds quite promising.

I have been assured 😊 that I am in safe hands and that the story will be updated regularly 😉

Looking forward to reading the SS

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Srilatha

@Srilathalolla

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Nice start. The way you wrote it was really good I loved the flow of your words. Waiting for the next update.

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Sonia

@sonia_92

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

rasgulla suggested this story in a recent update, and I'm so glad she did. this is a beautiful concept. A fresh concept, as opposed to an angry arnav, here we've got a sad yet soft side of his. so excited to read more.

love,
Sonia

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Very mysterious .. Looking forward!

Loving the title... And the story line :)))

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anu1017

@anu1017

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Amazing start, cannot wait to read more!!

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pravallika

@pravallika

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Wow!! You have started a new story after a long time... that's great..

It was an interesting start..

Arnav with his painful past.. and looks like kushi is a sankadevi. . Otherwise who will roam around in others property that too at midnight...

What did she leave behind for arnav.. is it her scarf????

Waiting for the story to unfold :-)

Thanx for the scrap dear :-)

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bmtdluver

@bmtdluver

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Saiyu recommended checking this story out, and I'm so glad she did! I really liked the first chapter and I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the story!! It had a dream like quality to it, making it very easy for Arnav (and the readers) to believe that maybe Khushi/the girl was just an illusion, after a day of loneliness and ache. I like the Cinderella allusion. What is her glass slipper? Is it her scarf? It has to be something uniquely Khushi yet common at the same time, so the Prince Charming has to struggle to find his Cinderella.

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