(ArHi) For The First Time: OS 2, 3 & 4, pg 21 (26/11/2015)

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Heavens_Flower

@Heavens_Flower

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Looks like Khushi was not the only one who freaked out... 😆

Beautiful thriller...👏

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canapoem

@canapoem

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#62

OMG Zee, you nailed this story. 👏

I was literally biting my nails while reading the entire story. You not only scared Khushi, LOL you scared me too. 😆

Very nice build up right from the beginning and superb climax. 👏

You are versatile babes, no doubt about it. Actually why did you even get this doubt in your mind, after reading "Revenge" itself I knew you can kill any genre you like.

Now waiting for the next installment.

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Lovenall

@Lovenall

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#63

This was just awesome!! You scared the wits out of us too!

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vandana73

@vandana73

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#64

God! I thought it was some spooky story.

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sida

@sida

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#65

awww that was sooo cute

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Disha

@dishashah4176

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Nice thinking. I do hope to see u with a new ss. U r one of my favorites on this forum.

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Divya Bharathi S

@divyaarnavsr

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Does this mean we will get only os ?

All the best for your new attempts.

This 1 was good :)

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Titaliya1234

@Titaliya1234

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#68

I for a second thought they had booked a haunted house! It was really spooky!

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Shamz

@Shamz94

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#69

Wooow this was amazing
Love it to bits, made me believe that is wasn't arnav at first the in the middle thought it was arnav which left me in two minds
I went more stuff from you