(ArHi) For The First Time: OS 2, 3 & 4, pg 21 (26/11/2015)

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sonal

@srain10

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

When are you posting next part zehra...

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Shah Sair Hassan

@ShahSAIR

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#82

oye hoy,,, os.. kya baat hai ji.. maza aagaya padhney mai.. loved it.. arshi kam tha bt bht maza aaya.. khushi ko draaney mai.lol

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rotten_pm

@rotten_pm

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

enjoyed it to the core..thnks for this one:)

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Aakanksha

@ina_saahil

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#84

It is a nice attempt to write a series of OS which have never really happened in our Arshi's life. I loved the first update. It ke[t me glued to my seat anticipating what is going to happen next. Somewhere in the back of my head I had an idea that Arnav must be doing all this, but the way u had described all the scary situations made me had goosebumps!!!

Good job.. Keep up the good work..

Do update soon and PM me for the next update please..

Lots of Love..😊😊

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Jini Tracy ;)

@-cadbury-

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#85

Wooww...wonderful story...

U will continue it ryt?

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asrcraze

@asrcraze

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#86

It's been so long since I read and commented on one of your works... I felt so happy while reading this 😃

Aise koi khelta hai kya?? 😲

The OS started all like a dream...England Shires...Castle and all and then ... well, all through the OS I was just imagining myself in Khushi's position... You know what would have happened to me 😛

(Though I wouldn't have needed all those special efforts - my imagination would do the job)

Very well written Lazy ...awesome the way you explained things Khushi was experiencing and the overall haunting ambience!

And I was remembering that "Daudti huyi mere bahon me aayegi" scene while reading this and hence I had a slight feeling all this was being staged but still it was a nice surprise there, Arnav ready to catch her when she passed out! 😳

But that doesn't atone for the fact that he scared her! He wouldn't know the feeling...😡

When is the next OS coming, btw?? I'd love to read what they're going to experience for the first time next 😉

Edited by asrcraze - 10 years ago

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aysemLDG

@aysemLDG

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#87

At first I thought someone from Arnav's enemies or business competitors will kidnap Khushi to take revenge from him or prevent him from obtaining a contract. Because of TV dramas, I became so filmy. But every horror Khushi faced turned out to be Arnav's joke. And It's Khushi's turn to make him pay for his scary joke.

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Deepthi

@-prodigy-

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#88

Loved it !! Enjoyed reading it :)

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Maria

@x.titli.x

Stunner

+ 13

Posted: 10 years ago

#89

Arnav is really smart it kinda reminded of the scene when he scared Khushi while she was alone at home (doing safaai😆)
I loved the whole atmosphere!
Brillant!
the end *blush* 😳