(ArHi) For The First Time: OS 2, 3 & 4, pg 21 (26/11/2015)

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saga_twilight

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

great story...omg I loved it

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sunitikapoor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Hey thanks Zehra for continuing your journey on IF by writing beautiful stories on ARSHI.

Beautiful OS...Superb concept with lots of thrill and suspense.

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Sadh123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Wow this was awesome.. I loved this spookiness.. Wow that was different.. Arnav messing around Khushi.. so cute.. but yeah I felt shudders pass through as I went about.. so beautifully written and I liked ur idea of first times.. unique concept.. hope to read more..

P.S: am a new reader so.. I finished reading love uninterrupted today.. gosh I fell head over heels n love with it.. it was like traveling through both their lives.. thank u for giving that story despite ur illness.. hope all is well with u..

And pls don't stop writing.. would love to read more of ur stories pls

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Jay

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Missed u so much Lazy...
FTFT is awesome concept...

Somehow we know Arnav is all there already...
But your narration really made us think whether some super natural thing present there.
Hayee..Arnavji planned everything for His Khushi...

Can't wait for more FTFT

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aarrsshhii

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

U really brought a spooky feeling in me... Awesome story... With a nice twist... Bring it on lazy ji:)

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sincereme

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Awesome Awesome. . Brilliantly written. . I had the feeling that Arnav is there but still the dread didn't leave me and at one point I even thought the house is haunted..

Absolutely Loved it... 😊

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abayance

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Very interesting! Want to read more of these :).

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sonal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Awesome start...

Loved the scene description where khushi sees arnav in mirror...

Looking forward to read many more such stories...

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Bhuvana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#59

OMG i really got scared while reading this story, i could only remember Bipasha's raaz which scared me even more, n finally happy that it was a well planned prank by mr arnav raizada.

hey, please send me all ur story updates. i have sent u a buddy request and plz accept it. u can send me mail also nasake123@gmail.com.