(ArHi) For The First Time: OS 2, 3 & 4, pg 21 (26/11/2015)

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#111

Hey Zehra...good to see you back not for one but for three OS's...I thought you forgot about this thread. So happy to know about your health too. Loved all of them...Wonderful OS's.

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afsha

@-afsha-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#112

Awesome OS's

2nd one I so wanted u to write more so we can get what happened ahead

3rd awww Bechara Arnav baby 😆😆😆 Sho shad

4th Loved it Arnav tried to amend his mistake

Haaye i wish u start writing FF n SS soon

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#113

What is this? Naa koi PM, naa koi email!

Luckily I saw this series of OSs when I checked on the forum.

Cute one shot. I thought you were writing a spooky story.

Arnav playing a prank on Khushi!

Poor girl. She must have got the scare of her life.

But then, all's well that ends well.

He is home and they are together.

So everything's fine.

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#114

Just read OS2.

Arnav seems to have met his match.

She seems to be the best thing to happen in Arnav's life.

He needs someone to put things right and to get Arnav's act together.

He will hopefully learn from his mistakes and become more responsiblr.

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#115

Haha! You got us with OS3.

I thought there will be a child marriage between the two chota chota kids.

But then you sprung the surprise on us and it was Manorama and Mahinder's rishta.

Khushi slapped Arnav!

Naughty girl.

How could she?

Doesn't she know he is the one her life will be bound to forever.

Cute story, Z.

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#116

Well written...very interesting one-shots...keep up the good work...simply amazing..👏

OS 2 - Arnav met his match and the way Khushi gave it back to him was great... brilliantly portrayed..👍🏼

OS 3 - This one-shot took me by surprise...just when I thought it was Arnav and Khushi's alliance which was to be fixed but here came a twist with these two being kids and Manorama and Mahinder wedding talks going on...the bachche Arnav and Khushi were rather very cute...😃

OS 4 - This is my favorite of the lot...Khushi is hurt by Arnav and the step Arnav takes to pacify her...awww..all this was very dreamy...loved it...

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orchids8888

@orchids8888

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#117

Welcome back dear...🤗

Thank you for updating after a long gap.😃

I loved OS 2, OS 3 & OS 4. But my favourite is OS 4.⭐️ I will put comments on them separately.

OS 2:

For the first time, Arnav got the taste of his own medicine. He thought his wife would be a docile one. But turned out, she is too intelligent & will not take any non-sense from him.😉

OS 3:

Its full of innocence. For the first time there is a story on Arnav-Khushi as chubby babies.😃

OS 4:

Loved the way Arnav came & stayed at Gupta house, just so that Khushi is not hurt. He wanted Khushi to always be happy. So for her smile, he did not take his cell or laptop & stayed at her parents place, though its way out of his comfort zone. This is true love.❤️

Please update quickly.

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#118

Amazing shots.. loved them all.. first one... loved Khushi.. kya biwi hai.. Arnav was shocked while second one was cute.. third one awesome.. so happy for this treat from you Z.. loved all of them.. take good care of yourself.. God bless 😊

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#119

Loved your take on Arnav Chale Sasural! 😆

OS4 was totally different again.

Loved Arnav's way of making it up to Khushi.

And giving her a surprise too.

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rizib

@rizib

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#120

Finally you're back!! How are you zehra? Hope you're much MUCH better than before.

Didn't read the other instalments yet. Going out for a lunch now, will come back, read and comment ok..

Ok I'm back. I read the note only now, very happy to know that you're doing fine, alhamdulillah.

OS 2, I would want to know more, what happens to the couple, as it didn't end in a good note. I know you're not gonna extend it, just told what I felt about it.

OS 3, you really got me there. After I read their age I went up and read the part again and still didn't get it. After I saw the names of the so called bride and groom to be,I realised what happened. Then it took me to the memories of LI and LU. This could've been one of the flashbacks. Was hit by nostalgia there...

OS 4, this is by far my favorite. Maybe coz it's something that could've taken place in the show. I really didn't like how Arnav fixed an air conditioner and all when he was at Gupta house, in the show. This OS is something I would have loved to see happen there.

Edited by rizib - 9 years ago