(ArHi) For The First Time: OS 2, 3 & 4, pg 21 (26/11/2015)

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shakrobaaj

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Posted: 9 years ago

#121

What a wonderful treat...
Iss teen OS ke kaaran muje Sholey ka famous dialogue yaad aa gaya...

But inn teeno OS mein muje OS 3 joki bahut cute laga and I loved the forth one.

Thanks for these beautiful OS.

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MsDroolKanthan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#122

Please say that you will continue the 2nd OS into a full fledged story, Pleaeeesee

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Arjuhisis

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Posted: 9 years ago

#123

Oh my God, zehra welcome back welcome back welcome back - it's so nice to have u back zehra

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coolpd93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#124

Hi Z,
i m not gonna edit on pg21...wow zehra:)i m so glad to c u back:)its a treat to read ur work..one side i m happy wid arshi s re entry...nw urs:)k...lemme tell u first d reason i m here:)

Abt d first one...omg arnav is fr some exciting lyf wid her..she give him back...thats really really unexpected fr arnav singh raizada(omg..the dictionary in my phone already has the name coz of frequent over use)...nw that he knw where he's n that with a splash of cold water on his ego by his village wife..khushi way to go dear..u handled 10+ content very well...nyc shot:)ll be back wid another post..no res:)

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1053117

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Posted: 9 years ago

#125

Wonderful shots loved all of them 1st one was simply awesome & 2nd one was very cute & 3rd one was lovely <3

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priya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#126

every os was different..
in 2nd os arnav was i dnt knw wht to say bt he was nt good i like khushi in tht one she was very strng woman nd with so much pride.. 3rd one was cute specially the last line.. nd coming back to last one which i liked the most.. it was great i loved arnav in tht very much..he was so understanding.. very good husband and son in law..

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deepa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#127

welcome back zehra and happy to hear that u feeling better.

loved all the os and it made me wonder how many of those first times we encounter every day in our daily lives. very original concept. kudos to u