(ArHi) For The First Time: OS 2, 3 & 4, pg 21 (26/11/2015)

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Shifa Khan

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Horrifying 😲

Why did u do it,Rasmalai ???😳

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Aspiring_Ayesha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#92

Nice update!

The build of the suspense and thrill was amazing... nice read!

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NinjaHathori

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Posted: 9 years ago

#93

Chuk Chuk gaadi chalti jaaye...
I hope ki chalti jaye..

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Shalma/Suman

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Posted: 9 years ago

#94

This one. Spooky for khushi. Lovely for me. Loved it.

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Sarita

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Really enjoyed this!

I knew he was there... poor thing got scared!

Looking forward to more in this series :)

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asrcraze

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Eventhough you posted the one I read last, I'll write about that first because I liked that the most :-)

After marriage, visiting any place without your husband is truly a dreadful experience I tell you!

You made it, no one cares everyone just wants to know where your husband is!

And in Khushi's case it would've been worse considering the circumstances they got married in. Khushi's hurt was justified but then Arnav's reason was too. It was good to see that it wasn't just work that was keeping him away and even though he was justified he did everything he could to put that smile back on his Khushi's face. They hurt each other but they also know how to make it right. i loved their relationship in this one...he doing things for her and she in turn putting his interests first :)

Now to the cutest one 😃

You deceived us well with that one. Knowing you, I was looking for that twist in the story and what a twist it was 😆

The Rishta was for Manorama and Mahinder...
I am imagining the scene and can't stop smiling. 1.6 years and she hit him and smiles a wicked smile while the other one is sulking...how cute!

Now, to the besharam OS!

When you mentioned some unknown village girl, I knew Khushi was going to be no demure village damsel and is going to give it back to him really hard. And she did :P

For a guy like Arnav in that OS, he deserved that for the way his thought process is. I really liked how Khushi showed him his place.

But why did you have to make Arnav such a worthless person? 😭 (I am partial towards him always 😛)

With Arshi's come back you made a come back with three OSs. Such a treat it was Lazy :)

Sorry for the late unres...I was really busy the past two days :(

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Filmyshilmy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#100

Z bhelcome back 🤗

Hope you are doing good now.

I like your new express delivery of OS system.

For the first one it was definitely something new. Kkgsr ko bhi darr lagta hain. So Arnav played a prankster. Spookiness was very much there. So a moment even I thought its a haunted house.

Second one I liked more. De danadan. Khushi ne ASR ki watt laga di( in my mumbaiya language)

I am ASR will soon fall in line with his new trainer called wife from small town.

Edited by dennisdmenace - 9 years ago