OS: Coloured Halos - Page 4

Originally posted by: chavvi16

all for playing holi she had alarm
well this is khushi we are on about
hmmm good start of holi tradition
and defo hot as well
well its arhi right
they dont do things half way do they
so she wanted to play with arnav before he went on his flight
awww so cute
arnav still feels so guilty what he did to khushi
but khushi has long forgiven him
time to forgive himself too

Originally posted by: DMGFan-2b-not2b

What a lovely OS! A lovely blend of humour, naughtiness, heartfelt emotions and a lovely bond between the two.

Originally posted by: AngelTeen

Very well written - a great blend of humour and emotion! Good job! :)

Very beautiful os dear loved it a lot specially arshi conversation their bonding their love for each other and their cute romance.

Loved it!!!! Especially the way your captured the essence of their first holi.

Writee moree..please! *whining lije a child*

The story is too cute...Please do continue writing...its really good for a 1st time...

Good job for the first time. 😛

Really enjoyed this shot. 😊

awww, i absolutely adored this story for the humour, emotion and their almost tangible love, it has all the elements of ipk that made me love it and ur arnav and khushi r damn near perfect i always wondered and imagined how their first holi together would be after that epic bhaang filled day (which gave all of us hope too and not just khushi) and ur version is beautiful 😳 i love why khushi wanted to make it a special thing just for them and i love how every day was special for arnav because he has her now 😭 so happy that u wrote it from both their perspectives, she's feisty and forever teasing and he still shouts and gets annoyed but now they're so beautifully in sync and of course have much better ways of resolving things ☺️ congrats on ur first ever piece of fiction, u did a fab job and i really hope u write many more ⭐️ and a big thank u to ur friend mimosa for forcing u to write 😃