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Pinkpearl10

@Pinkpearl10

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Picking ur name from ur login name, Hey Archana! :)

(correct me if i am wrong though)

Read all ur 3 OSs right away girl! :) and very rare it happens that I am forced to push myself to post a message.And ur writing did just that! :')😊

All the 3 stories are wonderfully written, very relatable and acceptable storyline and an amazing way of writing(The words used are Lovely)!👏👏 😃😃

And I am a confessed greedy reader, and u a b'ful writer, so write more girl, write more!! 😉😊

Do let me know if u have a blog or any other IPK stories written/posted here! Great going! Keep smiling, Keep Writing! 😊😊

Regards,

Vandana

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pmpm1

@pmpm1

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#52

This was so innately Khushi... loved it!

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SwrlngElephants

@SwrlngElephants

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#53

I loved this OS of yours. It was your first attempt but did not looked like one.

You are very talented.

I am glad I read such a beautiful piece. You made their holi indeed memorable. All the right melange of emotions. Love, repentance, humor, romance, seduction.

A complete wow.

I loved this Arnav of yours. 😉

Keep writing

xoxo

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Arunima

@barsha_dash

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#54

This was so good. How come I missed this!
Anyway, I enjoyed reading the perfect Holi celebrated by "impossible" Khushi and "unpleasant" Arnav 😃
Khushi has really become smart.

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FeistyDewdrop

@FeistyDewdrop

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

This is so lovely... Fantabulous beginning to your writing fiction I must say... Very very entertaining!!!!

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shalbi

@shalbi

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#56

it was nice and romantic and oh what an end to the very beautiful end to the holi fiasco..

he is definetly going to fix this as a ritual for every holi..

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Lily30

@Lily30

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#57

loved the os👏

please pm me whenever you write😃

you are an mazing writer

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SanzforSush

@SanzforSush

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Hey Archana 🤗
Awww this was so sweet and romantic at the same time! Such cute things these two are! Khushi with her usual nautanki and Arnav with his yelling! I'm actually picturising all these scenes in my naughty mind 😆
Wonderful job!

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#59

That was Wow.. And you say it was your first!

Thank you for writing and exploring .. This is wonderful work.. It's s perfect name to your OS series.. I'm already hooked to your work!

It's feels a pure revival of characters after their re-marriage and the show ended!

Loving this and look forward to reading them all:)))

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Lovelyday

@Lovelyday

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#60

I have read all your one shots and am totally in love with your writing !! It's so refreshing to see a quirky and bubbly and confident Khushi and absolutely a treat to see a sappy sweet totally in love Arnav .. This combo is irresistible

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