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@sanjuarshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

this one is lovely,funny,wonderful and what not 👏👏👏👏👏👏 loved it a lot 🤗

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VAISH

@Pinky.Raya

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Oye-Hoye! Kya baat hai! You finally posted your first official work on IF! I know how big a step this was for you! I am so glad someone was able to persuade you to do so! So,

I finally finished reading it! It was so looong,it may not have seemed so for IPKKND-ians,though! 😛 I am sure they all went--

But,on a serious note it was really nice. Very well written( isn't that obvious?)

I loved the fact that these two were so normal (in their own way).

All that I know about IPKKND has always been from your POV! I did watch this show but was never able to fan-girl over it,like you!So,whatever I felt after reading this is all based on how you feel about the characters of this show.

I loved their scene in bed! They were still so much in character even at 5 A.M. in the morning! Kushi being her clumsy,crazy-self and ASR being,well,ASR!

I am surprised that Aarav is still living at the Raizada mansion,considering how you feel about that brat! And you had to mention Friends! My head went straight to Chandler and how sweetly and patiently he used to deal with Monica's eccentricities! And,here,so does ASR!

Frankly your OS made me feel for ASR ! He was shown as a man of passion,care and substance! Considering how most husbands usually don't leave a chance to flee the country just to get away from their wives and family,this one planned to dump all his work load on poor Aman's head just so that he could spend this Holi with his dear wifey! Awww...! ASR is a romantic,after all,underneath that hard-core exterior!Knowing how much you love ASR(BS)'s lean body I am sure you must have gushed,at least a little, while writing the part where he was wrapped in a towel and also the last scene. Kushi is truly,insanely adorable. You cannot not love that girl!

P.S. I really liked your OS! Probably all these comments will help you clear your writer's block and encourage you to post more stuff for people to read,and you,to make me read them! 😆

Hope you liked my comment! If you did,then smile 😊

BELATED Happy waali HOLI 😳

Edited by Pinky.Raya - 10 years ago

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Archana M H

@archana.mh17

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Thank you so much for reading, liking & commenting.

I will respond to each comment individually to thank you people as soon as possible. This is so encouraging for somebody trying her hand at this for the very first time, like me.

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Awesome

It was fun to read this one shot 👏

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Archana M H

@archana.mh17

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: -MIMOSA-
Will be back after controlling my over flowing emotions!
Archu, I am proud of you darling!🤗

Only you could become emotional about my writing! Everything else, I have already said in the author's note & to you, directly! I wouldn't have written or posted this OS if not for you & you know it!

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-MIMOSA-

@-MIMOSA-

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: archana.mh17

Only you could become emotional about my writing! Everything else, I have already said in the author's note & to you, directly! I wouldn't have written or posted this OS if not for you & you know it!

See! You are doing it again! You are making me emotional!

Aisa kuch nahi hai...you have it in you...maine sirf band gaadi ko dhakka diya aur start kiya...and you know it! 😉

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KBS

@oKBSo

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

I love friends!

okay now about the os

Do I have to say it really, it is obvious... it was awesome!

Well written, awesome execution lovely moments,hot sensual kiss

What more we want :P

Awesome and wonderful

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h-arshi89

@h-arshi89

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

such a wonderful os..it has everything in it starting from their memories about their past, love, happiness, guilt, sorrow, and last but not the least, passion😉.

such a beautiful holi based os. loved it

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Archana M H

@archana.mh17

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: arshifan89
such a wonderful os..it has everything in it starting from their memories about their past, love, happiness, guilt, sorrow, and last but not the least, passion😉.

such a beautiful holi based os. loved it

Thank you for reading this OS & posting this comment. I am glad you enjoyed reading it.

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Archana M H

@archana.mh17

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: oKBSo
I love friends!

okay now about the os

Do I have to say it really, it is obvious... it was awesome!

Well written, awesome execution lovely moments,hot sensual kiss

What more we want :P

Awesome and wonderful

Firstly, High five! I love Friends, too!

And thank you for reading this OS & posting a comment. I am not very comfortable writing intimacy, but it's reassuring to see people did think the kiss was at least sensual to some extent.

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