ArHi OS: My Father |Note P10|

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Anisha

@-Aniisha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

beautiful OS dear

loved it to the core

keep writing !

thanks for the PM

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ShikhaKhushi

@ShikhaKhushi

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

It was sooo beautiful Heleeji! Best of luck for the exams!!!!

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anu1017

@anu1017

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

That was a beautiful OS!!! Loved it😊

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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

that was incredbly beautiful...u should write more OS..u have a way with words which touch emotional chord of readers👏..outstandingly beautiful👏

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Wow that was so beautiful and amazing, yet very emotional.

Thank you for a very long update, I always love reading your stories.

Love the fact the one shot was based on Shashi and you wrote part off it beautifully from his point of view.

Awww love the way Shashi finally accepted Arnav and knows he was worthy of khushi's love and trust, I so wanted this in the serial.

The ending was perfect with Khushi and her own family, so beautiful and a perfect end.

The one shot was written exceptionally well and a brilliant read,

Thanks for the PM xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 11 years ago

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sugarhugs

@sugarhugs

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

beautiful os..👏

Edited by Rubab4137 - 11 years ago

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koisk

@koisk

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Wow just beautiful.loved it.👏

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

A very heart warming tale.
You have beautifully explored so many relationships and have covered each angle.

Well written

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Tiramisu_coffee

@Tiramisu_coffee

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

That was so beautiful n emotional ... The hospital scene in show marked a change in their relationship n a human Arnav peeked out.. But that was it.. So i m glad u wrapped ur story around the same hospital n some of the possibilities that could have been explored...one thing worries me though, how are u ever going to be a doctor n not reminisce this hospital snippet every time u r there? The interactions between Arnav n Shashi were the most touching!! N of course ASR's daughter has to be a tough cookie just like her dad .. How thoughtful@ kids' names!! Love everything about this OS... Miss ya but study well!!

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lala rukh

@lalarukh

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

wow its beautiful...so many emotions...bond btw father and daughter...there care and concern...loved arnav here...and there kids...its beautifully written...very very heart touching os:)