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fffan123

@fffan123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Cute and heart-touching... 👏 👏 👏

Loved it.

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@...OceanEyes...

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Di..readng ur os after so many days..😊
and again..a bombastic one..😃
loved it...wow..❤️
AND LOVE U TOOO..

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esamoe

@esamoe

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Wow dear u do not seem to stop suprising me with your lovely writing!

This OS was sooo beautifully written.

It was very touching and heartwarming reallly enjoyed it!

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RizArshi

@RizArshi

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

That was very beautiful. Heart touching

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Raji Senthilkumar

@RajiSobtian

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Wowww...awesome OS I loved it...
Thanks buddy.
All the Best 4 ut exams 👍🏼

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..SunnYaara..

@..SunnYaara..

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

wow yaar...it brought tears to my eyes dont know u have written beautifully yaar...awesome fabulous...thanks for pm

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

That was really cute. Loved it. In the beginning Khushi was the daughter looking in and then it was Anandita. Loved the play of emotions and relationships. Very beautifully written.

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

A very nice os. I loved it.

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

beautiful os

loved how you related shashi's and arnav's situations...

simply loved

thanks for the pm

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

This was AWESOME, BRILLIANT AND FANTABOLOUS.

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

After reading this beautiful one shot which is epitome of feelings and emotion of a father daughter relation, I must say you are a versatile writer, I got hook to this shot after reading its first paragraph.

The way you describe and compare the two scenes in diffrent tenses was beautiful, one when it was Shashi admitted in the hospital and Khushi was taking care of him with the help of Arnav and then it was arnav who was in hospital bed and standing besides him was his princess.

You beautifully portrayed Shashi and Khushi strong relation and unbound love and care for each other irrespective to the drama.

Love the names of Arnav and Khushi children.

Looking forward to read more one shots.