arshi ff: without you... #2, chapters 14 - 27 **completed**

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Mehreen

@Motif_Soul

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#851

Indi it is really touching and compelling the way you pull up this story and weaved it into their united past.Splendid.👏

These lines are coming in my head , I read once in a novel, don't remember which one yet the poem is by Cody

Looking over your shoulder, looking into your past

All this is going to finally elaspe
The pain I've been through, is hard to get to
The pressure suceeds, to its finally degree

Tossing and turning in the bed at night
Always waking up, in a dreadful fright
Looking up at you, with a knife and blood on it
Looking down at the gash, that was caused by your hit

Edited by MehreenB - 11 years ago

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#852

What a torture it must have been for him to hear all this.

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mpuhan

@mpuhan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#853

Finally the two faced worthless man reveals the truth. It never stops to amaze me how someone stoops so low just to get hand on money. How insane jealously creates so much of destruction. The man is beyond help .. he sold and threw away his soul a long time back.
But this time he has forgotten Arnav isn't the son of Dushyant alone but even a part of Ratna. Arnav was raised by her alone as his father was a lost case even when he lived.
Khushi and Arnav have lived with their horrendous past for years now. They have been dealing with their loss and pain for a long time and together have come to terms with it and have found a solace with each other due to that. Chachaji has underestimated their connection and love for each other if he now thinks it would make any difference to them on hearing the truth.
But I am sure Shyam is planning something else. This isn't about Chachaji anymore but rather Shyam. And we are going to find that out very soon.
fabulous update Indi ... as usual😃

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mayurisb80

@mayurisb80

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#854

so much because of one vindictive person...and what did he achieve...

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anu1017

@anu1017

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#855

Awesome update Indu Di, loved it as usual!!!

Felt bad for both Arshi, how can a person be so mean and heartless :-( I am sure Khushi will be rescued soon and Arnav is going to teach a very good lesson to the useless uncle!!!!

Cannot wait for your next update 😊

Edited by anu1017 - 11 years ago

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jtammareddy

@jtammareddy

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#856

Awesome update. Khushi heard everything. Arnav's uncle is just evil. Thanks for the pm.

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Atyay

@Atyay

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#857

Awesome 👏 Loved it!.
The truth is finally out before both Arnav & Khushi. I wonder how they will tackle this situation with their uncle now...

Thanks for the PM. 😊

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indi52

@indi52

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#858

Originally posted by: nishu_shorna
So the past is out... And its horrible... Poor ArShi... I wish I could kill that 'chachaji' of him... Disgusting jerk... Wondering how the snake came to know about all these... Waiting for the next part... Want ArShi safe, and together...

hi nishu_shorna,

if the past were not dreadful how would it have that effect on asr... so glad you want to kill chacha ji. it was un.damn.bearable writing about him. exhausted me. i wanted to bludgeon his face and bury him in the walls of sheeshmahal... sorry my most blood thirsty side he doth beckon. 😆 imagine shyam is still left... i must tackle him soon. thanks for reading... for feeling. asr khushi, it was never going to be easy but oh it will always be hot.😳😳

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indi52

@indi52

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#859

Originally posted by: MyluvASR
awesome update😊

thanks, myluvasr, good to see you.

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indi52

@indi52

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#860

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules
I want to reach into the page and kill that damned chachaji! How couldvanyone be so evil? Poor Arnav and Khushi! i hope this nightmare ends soon for both of them and I hope now that Arnav knows the truth he can finally start to heal!

hi bloomnskyrules,

i am so happy you wish to decimate the leering idiot... i am pretty blood thirsty when it come sto him too. exhausted me, writing about him... i can't imagine how blown away and battered asr is feeling... and khushi. this nightmare will end, it must. thanks for reading.