arshi ff: without you... #2, chapters 14 - 27 **completed** - Page 34

Originally posted by: IssPKaur

Aww if only i hadn't said Sorry!! You out there on the deck all lit up? Yeh humney kyon miss kiya!! Felt like apologising, so did...no practice involved😆... though i sometimes do have a dragged down of my own on both sides, i'll have you know😆

Ek chutki goosebump ki reach 🤣 love love love. As for knowing the secret of them shins, gust of wind blew aur humen pataa chal gaya. Bas.😆

Please to continue the dahi and the kachauri. It's great fun. And so very inspiring. Of course i'll shout if anything jars anytime... though i doubt you'd ever be so wide off the mark... cos you're sharply tuned in, my Indus! Bas not to get carried away with anything... that's what i tell myself too... too severe on self, some friends tell me... but i believe in holding back rather than going overboard... Boring?? Bas aisa hi hoon main, as someone famously muttered...😊

Anyway... Pucca, will sound that alarm if need be... And you're ekdam right... the cutesy doesn't cut it for me either. This "hum KKGSR" business is very tricky! Surface sankagiri doesn't work... gotta have intrigue...unpredictability...oh how i love that in characters!

Work ati zaalim but am in a good place vis a vis it... isliye fine is the fettle.

Hope to be able to spend more time with you jaldi. Looking forward to grabbing a bite of NCOFL tonite! Yum!! Can't wait!!

Originally posted by: indi52

gust of wind... oh what would we do without it. hume pata hi nahin chalta.

issk, i read bas main aisa hi hoon, and i can hear a voice sounding lost, its assertive grain gone, instead an anguish in it... where is this voice... i want to scream and shout and cry and say bring it back to me. but he is not my khilona and i am all grown up and supposed to be cool about such things.

so i do the next best thing, i make him up and tell his tale and keep him close to me... my thoughts, my words, my shins.

paagal right?

too severe on self, i know you have this little trait... as you have mentioned before. in our world i guess this is valued too... we are asked to set high standards for ourselves, not be happy with what's easy to attain... and if you're brought up by a loving shouting bengali mother, then thinking you are "smart" (this is a sure sign of extreme hubris and the furies will get you for it) or anything even remotely wonderful just because you've achieved a little something is the greatest folly ever, you will be surely told. don't think no end of yourself, ok? you are just a most ordinary or less than that being.

this whole thing is basically the opposite of the thumbs up, "good job" (pronounced good ja-aab, with voice dipping at appropriate places) type of bringing up of little people born to you.

there are good things and bad things in both. i guess. but the more i see the spread of true mind numbing and heartbeat flattening mediocrity and it being vaunted as ammmazzing and awwwssum, something in me yearns for the holding back and not going overboard days.

a certain amount of being severe on self, there's merit in it. so lage raho, issk ji. there's nothing superficial or cutesy about it. uff what's with the "hum kkgsr". i of coss, have theory ji theory... note bitwa always says "main" and sunshine always says "hum". note also, almost all tv heorine ji's address themselves as hum. earlier i used to think this was a trendy thing or maybe it sounds more endearing, cute. aaargh that word.

but think a bit more and...

main is "i" loud and clear. me. hum is the diffused, gentler "i"... "we" suggested in it. are we seeing here how our language is used to keep girls in their place, a little hum and not so assertive, sure as hell, main? that being the clear prerogative of the man... ze male... ze one we are created to support but never exceed? socheka padi.

me thinking too much? you know how aisa hi main hoon. ab kya karoon...

see ya soon, hope ncofl has you laughing and feeling good.

Originally posted by: supriya.arshi

I can't stop smilin 😃😃😃

tht was just a fabulous update...the ending was perfect icing on the cake



she played hard get...nd he woo'd her in true ASR stlye...hayeee

i swear my heart was beating rapidly reading the romantic scene

the startin part only ASR could get wat Khushi thinks or goes thro at weird situation 😆
nd her raging jealousy whn she saw Arnav place a kiss on some1 else...uff too hot 🤣

i still cant stop smiling😃😃...i loved the way he melted her anger completely...i love him here 😳
nd he took her away , away from every1 , just the two for a whole week

Indi i loved this chapter thoroughly...Thank you thank thank you soo muchhh...lots of kisses to you

i loved your writing...i think you knw tht by now...truly beautiful⭐️⭐️...nd Arnav-Khushi r away for a week ...wat a bliss