arshi ff: without you... #2, chapters 14 - 27 **completed** - Page 33

Indi what a cute update and a jealous Khushi with ASR placating her in a way that she wont open her mouth😉

True once you start writing the story takes its shape and so do characters😃

Originally posted by: indi5

2hi durga,

i know, such a lovely edit by libranangel 😳.

please do not change your story. given the basic framework of hour characters there's bound to be overlap in our tales, just write yours the way you saw it.

thanks for liking the details of the chapter. doctor verma is a guy with his own past. in reality, is tehre anyone without a moving tale of one sort or the other? i used to think as a kid that some things happen only in stories, but no they happen to us then make it to narratives. all stories ever told are like a collective biography of the humans.

if i take the basic broad chapters of my life itself, we could write a solid tv soap he he.

that was babu ji who loves that u.p. wali urad dal with lots of ghee in it (my friend would say that her father said, this dal should be made more runny only with ghee, not water, coincidentally uncle is a doctor 😳). payal is thinking of her father, how much he loves that, perhaps missing him a bit and plying the guest she is very grateful to with more of it... just one of those things.

writing fiction is supremely challenging, especially if you haven't done it before and on the days that your imagination refuses to move, uff. but there is a thrill to it i must say, especially if something falls into place. these days me in a very dry spell... had to push myself like a maniac top get this chapter out.

thanks for liking it and feeling things.

it was awsumm chapter arnav is making her jealous n they really run away 😊

Came across your story , loved it. Waiting for next update.

Why I took so long to read this update. I'm not apologizing for reading it late, but I'm cursing myself why I didn't read it earlier.