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Posted: 11 years ago
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Episode 190 - 192


Gham ki Raat



Khushiyon ki shaam bani gham ki raat
Pal mein ud gaye hosh, bikhar gaye jazbaat
Na khabar thi kisiko, na huyi koi baat
Ek shaadi se bangaye sangeen halaat

Apnon ke dilon mein ek aag bhadki
Jigar ke tukdon ne kardi gustaakhi
Har ek ne poocha vajah iss baat ki
Na mila jawaab, reh gaye sawaal baaki
Jiske liye ye kadam uthaya
Uss behan se nazar mila na paya
Wo sada khush rahe, isiliye dard apna chupaya
Uske palbhar ke dukh ka khud ko kaaran banaya
Na vajah pata thi, na pata natije ki
Bas ek hi mansha, ke ho jiji ki shaadi
Apni achhayion ka saza aisi mili
Har rishta choot gaya, na rahi wo kisiki
Lambi si raat ab dhalne lagi
Badhti huyi aandhi ab thamne lagi
Ek jhatke mein hi palat chuki hai baazi
Kisiki premika nahin, ab wo hai uski patni

Translation:
The evening of delight became a gloomy night
Stunned in a moment, scattered are the emotions
No one knew nor anyone had been told
A marriage created tense situations
A fire arose in the hearts of dear ones
Their cherished young ones had committed a blunder
Everyone asked for the reason
Got no answer, the questions remained
The one for whom this step was taken
Couldn't meet eyes with that sister
For her to be happy ever, he hid his pain
He became the reason for her momentary sadness
The reason was not known nor the result
Only one wish that jiji gets married
A punishment she got for her good deeds
Every relation slipped away, she remained no one's
The long night has started to set
The incoming storm is now halting
In one stroke, the tables have turned
Not somebody's lover, now she's his wife


Edited by DurgaS - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DurgaS

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Episode 190 - 192


Gham ki Raat



Khushiyon ki shaam bani gham ki raat
Pal mein ud gaye hosh, bikhar gaye jazbaat
Na khabar thi kisiko, na huyi koi baat
Ek shaadi se bangaye sangeen halaat

Apnon ke dilon mein ek aag bhadki
Jigar ke tukdon ne kardi gustaakhi
Har ek ne poocha vajah iss baat ki
Na mila jawaab, reh gaye sawaal baaki
Jiske liye ye kadam uthaya
Uss behan se nazar mila na paya
Wo sada khush rahe, isiliye dard apna chupaya
Uske palbhar ke dukh ka khud ko kaaran banaya
Na vajah pata thi, na pata natije ki
Bas ek hi mansha, ke ho jiji ki shaadi
Apni achhayion ka saza aisi mili
Har rishta choot gaya, na rahi wo kisiki
Lambi si raat ab dhalne lagi
Badhti huyi aandhi ab thamne lagi
Ek jhatke mein hi palat chuki hai baazi
Kisiki premika nahin, ab wo hai uski patni

Durga, you got the crux of it so very apt again..loved your pondering about the questions without answers..and cherry on the cake is the last line.. she is not Shyam's lover but his wife now.. if he couldn't get her in love , he would by marriage..
I remember your telugu poem for Khushi's pain these epis.. that was fab..
thanks durga.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DurgaS

Disclaimer: Please do not copy my work anywhere. If you do, please give credit.

Episode 190 - 192


Gham ki Raat



Khushiyon ki shaam bani gham ki raat
Pal mein ud gaye hosh, bikhar gaye jazbaat
Na khabar thi kisiko, na huyi koi baat
Ek shaadi se bangaye sangeen halaat

Apnon ke dilon mein ek aag bhadki
Jigar ke tukdon ne kardi gustaakhi
Har ek ne poocha vajah iss baat ki
Na mila jawaab, reh gaye sawaal baaki
Jiske liye ye kadam uthaya
Uss behan se nazar mila na paya
Wo sada khush rahe, isiliye dard apna chupaya
Uske palbhar ke dukh ka khud ko kaaran banaya
Na vajah pata thi, na pata natije ki
Bas ek hi mansha, ke ho jiji ki shaadi
Apni achhayion ka saza aisi mili
Har rishta choot gaya, na rahi wo kisiki
Lambi si raat ab dhalne lagi
Badhti huyi aandhi ab thamne lagi
Ek jhatke mein hi palat chuki hai baazi
Kisiki premika nahin, ab wo hai uski patni

Translation:
The evening of delight became a gloomy night
Stunned in a moment, scattered are the emotions
No one knew nor anyone had been told
A marriage created tense situations
A fire arose in the hearts of dear ones
Their cherished young ones had committed a blunder
Everyone asked for the reason
Got no answer, the questions remained
The one for whom this step was taken
Couldn't meet eyes with that sister
For her to be happy ever, he hid his pain
He became the reason for her momentary sadness
The reason was not known nor the result
Only one wish that jiji gets married
A punishment she got for her good deeds
Every relation slipped away, she remained no one's
The long night has started to set
The incoming storm is now halting
In one stroke, the tables have turned
Not somebody's lover, now she's his wife




Durga, 😊

The underlines are killing...how dreadful those moments were...I don't wanna go back there...

Lo👏vely
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DurgaS

Disclaimer: Please do not copy my work anywhere. If you do, please give credit.

Episode 190 - 192


Gham ki Raat



Khushiyon ki shaam bani gham ki raat
Pal mein ud gaye hosh, bikhar gaye jazbaat
Na khabar thi kisiko, na huyi koi baat
Ek shaadi se bangaye sangeen halaat

Apnon ke dilon mein ek aag bhadki
Jigar ke tukdon ne kardi gustaakhi
Har ek ne poocha vajah iss baat ki
Na mila jawaab, reh gaye sawaal baaki
Jiske liye ye kadam uthaya
Uss behan se nazar mila na paya
Wo sada khush rahe, isiliye dard apna chupaya
Uske palbhar ke dukh ka khud ko kaaran banaya
Na vajah pata thi, na pata natije ki
Bas ek hi mansha, ke ho jiji ki shaadi
Apni achhayion ka saza aisi mili
Har rishta choot gaya, na rahi wo kisiki
Lambi si raat ab dhalne lagi
Badhti huyi aandhi ab thamne lagi
Ek jhatke mein hi palat chuki hai baazi
Kisiki premika nahin, ab wo hai uski patni

Translation:
The evening of delight became a gloomy night
Stunned in a moment, scattered are the emotions
No one knew nor anyone had been told
A marriage created tense situations
A fire arose in the hearts of dear ones
Their cherished young ones had committed a blunder
Everyone asked for the reason
Got no answer, the questions remained
The one for whom this step was taken
Couldn't meet eyes with that sister
For her to be happy ever, he hid his pain
He became the reason for her momentary sadness
The reason was not known nor the result
Only one wish that jiji gets married
A punishment she got for her good deeds
Every relation slipped away, she remained no one's
The long night has started to set
The incoming storm is now halting
In one stroke, the tables have turned
Not somebody's lover, now she's his wife



lovely Durga.
How surreal, a wedding night of a girl's life is supposed to be mirthful, but Khushi's wedding night is full of agony.
these two lines are my most favorite

Apni achhayion ka saza aisi mili
Har rishta choot gaya, na rahi wo kisiki
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Horizon



Durga, you got the crux of it so very apt again..loved your pondering about the questions without answers..and cherry on the cake is the last line.. she is not Shyam's lover but his wife now.. if he couldn't get her in love , he would by marriage..
I remember your telugu poem for Khushi's pain these epis.. that was fab..
thanks durga.


Thanks Indu. Yes, there were questions and questions all around and the two didn't have much to say. Nobody, not even Khushi knew why all this happened. It was Arnav's decision and he couldn't disclose the reason.

Ya, the Telugu poem. My first one. I couldn't stop myself after watching the epi in Telugu. But was surprised I did manage to write one. I am proud of those three Telugu poems, though I do feel I could have done better if I knew the language more deeply. Telugu has so many beautiful words.

Here's the link for that poem:


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha



Durga, 😊

The underlines are killing...how dreadful those moments were...I don't wanna go back there...

Lo👏vely


Thanks Faiqa. Yes, those were heartbreaking moments. Tough for everyone.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sohara


lovely Durga.
How surreal, a wedding night of a girl's life is supposed to be mirthful, but Khushi's wedding night is full of agony.
these two lines are my most favorite

Apni achhayion ka saza aisi mili
Har rishta choot gaya, na rahi wo kisiki


Thanks Sohara. Khushi had so many dreams of her marriage. All shattered. She lost everything that night. Even Arnav hadn't expected this reaction. He hardly pondered the after effects of his decision.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for that link durga..
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb di👏
Edited by divsarunfan - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
Durga, I'm just catching up with all your poems! They are so beautifully written with intense and heart wrenching moments! I really enjoyed reading them! Your edits are lovely too! Thanks for sharing!!



Edited by Katelyn - 11 years ago

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