My first poem in Telugu on Arshi with translation

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello everybody, Most of us have been watching IPK Telugu in Maa tv and we know that the intense hate marriage track has started. I have written a poem based on this track. My first ever poem in Telugu and it is based on Arshi. Hope you all like it.
This poem is about Khushi's thoughts after the hate marriage, after the Gupta family leaves her and goes away and Khushi is left alone in the hall.
Episode 192

Ae neraaniki naaku siksha padindi ila
Rakshasuduga maraadu rakumarudu aela
Madhura kshnaala kosam kalalu kannanu
Tiyyani maatala kosam eduru choosanu
Oka oopulo manasu virigipoyindi
Dwesha tufaanulo pelli ayipoyindi
Jarigina daaniki kaaranam teliyaledu
Adigina prasnaku badulu ivvaledu
Baadhato tirigi vellipoyindi sonta janamantaa
Ontariga migili poyaanu anaadhaga
Translation:
For what crime did I get this punishment
Why did the prince turn into a demon (rakshas)
I dreamt of sweet moments
I waited for sweet words
In one move, my heart broke
In a hate storm, marriage took place
Did not know the reason for what happened
Did not give reply to the questions asked
With grief my own people went back
And I remained like an orphan
Link to the index for my other poems: DurgaS's Index
My other two Telugu poems:
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wonderful poem. Chala bagundi.
I think, Pelli ayipoyindi anekante Pelli jarigipoyindi ante inka baguntendemo. Because virigipoyindi and jarigipoyindi rhyming la untundi. Don't mind. It's just my opinion.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Donno telgu but after reading the translation i can say tht ur poem is AWESUM!!! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: dimple288

Wonderful poem. Chala bagundi.
I think, Pelli ayipoyindi anekante Pelli jarigipoyindi ante inka baguntendemo. Because virigipoyindi and jarigipoyindi rhyming la untundi. Don't mind. It's just my opinion.

Thanks, actually jarigipoyindi ane rasanu, kaani next line lo malli jarigina daniki ani repeat chesanu kabatti malli adi maarchanu.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: HeBarun21

Donno telgu but after reading the translation i can say tht ur poem is AWESUM!!! :)

Thank you so much.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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durga,

i wish i could understand telegu. but even in translateion it's lovely. the last two lines, 👏. orphan again. all her "hahakar" as we say in bangla, seems to be in those rounded long gripping telegu words. really, such a night it was for a her. that she recovered at all...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: indi52

durga,

i wish i could understand telegu. but even in translateion it's lovely. the last two lines, 👏. orphan again. all her "hahakar" as we say in bangla, seems to be in those rounded long gripping telegu words. really, such a night it was for a her. that she recovered at all...

Thanks Indi, it was an intense last week, both on bftp and IPK Telugu. Wanted to write something about those moments, and since I'm watching in Telugu, thought let's give it a try.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chala ba rasav... Supeer... :-D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice dear...nicely written..koncham emotional but loved it...keep going..keep writing...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: swat.g

Chala ba rasav... Supeer... :-D

Chala thanksandi. 😊
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