arshi ff: without you... thread #1, chapters 1-13 **completed**

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Indi

Supurb your fiction kyu dard hai itna isse padne me OMG could we have watched this scene wont the sase ruk jayegi for both of them and us viewers if this happens can Khushi live without him, when she did not want him to go to London now reading the fiction

Chapter 1

Indi all the sweet flashbacks in between the current sad story wow but so sad how will Khushi live without her laad Governor her heart as if someone has squeezed it dry without emotions ,the breath stopped awe the sweetness and sadness together got all emotional on the Monday morning. superb

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bewakoofLadki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

by d comments u might have known how nice ur story idea is.
i read d prologue n d first chp n its indeed nice...

bt but i do not have a heart to read sad stories...sob n ur prologue n chp 1 itself had my heart constrict n a lumped formed in my throat...

so yeah i thot i should comment n tell u it was indeed very heart touchng...

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: cinthiann1758
My dear Indi,

I haven't been on our thread for a long time and when I returned to find this I nearly jumped for joy!

I have read your prologue and chapter 1 and my heart can't stop fluttering and the tears and sadness I feel is way too much.
Your writing makes me feel as if I am standing right there. I feel and see Kushi in pain and I just don't know what I can do to help her.

I can't imagine an Arnav without Kushi or Kushi without Arnav.

I am not sure where you are going with this but I know it has to be a place where I want to be.

Keep it up my IPK sister I will support you all the way through!

Cyn xo👏

cynthia,

thank you, my dear blast partner for finding the time to read this. i know your life is h...e...c...t...i...c right now but you still read. 🤗 and are willing to offer me unstinting support though i make you sad.

fiction... it's a new thing for me... hope it gets to the right place.

tears, sadness... without it would there be love? 😆 especially, asr khushi love.

i know we have a hankering for happily ever after, and the serial has ended on that note... but cynthia, all life is challenge, change, stuff... but if that emotion we put so much by has any strength, is true, then that is all that remains unchanged.

and that is all that really is needed for us to go on.

now have i sounded deep and mysterious enough?

i will never hurt our asr khushi, but i will not also retire into la la land with them... they are real, they are fantastic, they are sexy beyond belief... they will get through everything, even if it's an affair asr has... i am adamant... anything. how terrible is this writer.

and before your hurl stuff at me... no asr will not have an affair... my thought really is... no matter what the challenge, asr and khushi are going to keep on finding their love and becoming one... hamesha.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: massu91
by d comments u might have known how nice ur story idea is.
i read d prologue n d first chp n its indeed nice...

bt but i do not have a heart to read sad stories...sob n ur prologue n chp 1 itself had my heart constrict n a lumped formed in my throat...

so yeah i thot i should comment n tell u it was indeed very heart touchng...

hi massu91,

thank you so much. sorry to have made you feel sad. sometimes we need to be sad to find happy i guess. i don't mean to cause sadness, just follow a story... i too am looking forward to the happiness it will discover.

hope to see you again and thanks so so much for your words, very sweet of you.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: chalhov
Indi
Supurb your fiction kyu dard hai itna isse padne me OMG could we have watched this scene wont the sase ruk jayegi for both of them and us viewers if this happens can Khushi live without him, when she did not want him to go to London now reading the fiction

Chapter 1

Indi all the sweet flashbacks in between the current sad story wow but so sad how will Khushi live without her laad Governor her heart as if someone has squeezed it dry without emotions ,the breath stopped awe the sweetness and sadness together got all emotional on the Monday morning. superb

i am dancing looking at that in pink. need dancing emoticon, wjere's katelyn? 😆 how will khsuhi live without her laad governor? how indeed. so happy to give you emotional monday, now the day will go well i know. 😃

chalhov, thanks for reading. always grateful when anyone reads my stuff. your comments most appreciated. back on the weekend with update.

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

What asr is a ghost!!!!

I loved how you used flashback will current happenings (if that makes any sense)

I alwaysed wo set what would happened if the show went o

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

asr is a ghost?

anita, nahiiin.

he is a man, flesh blood tissue muscle flashing brain pumping heart killer looks.

and she is a woman who belongs to him.

no ghost spirit all that stuff.

you liked the style? the construct. thank you so so much. 🤗

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Cadence_12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

sorry i sound like a stuck record but OMG again. this is simply fantastic! and shit scary. i want to know what happened and i dont want to know what happened...waaa.

as an aside, i always wondered what would have happened if they had actually kissed on diwali night.

and now am wondering why the hell did you wait so long to start writing fiction!🤗

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#89

rashmi,

🤗

thanks for coming and reading. i so wanted a kiss to happen for i felt they would have... it was diwali night or not no idea yet... but definitely when he was still officially la's bf.

you scared? me too. first, no idea what's happening to asr. second, never written this sort of stuff before. it's tougher than we imagine. only love can get it going and struggle beyond the blank spaces the imagination tends to gleefully throw up.

just had to, those pictures were bothering me.

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IssK.

@IssK.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#90

Wonderful heartstopping prologue and chapter 1, Indi! I'm still reeling from it!!

I rarely ever read fan fiction but i saw your post and thought i should try. Cos i knew my beloved Khushi and ASR were definitely safe with you 😊

I love the kiss. It should have happened back then. A raw passionate instinct on his part, and for her to take the lead and fly with it in that magical moment.