arshi ff: without you... thread #1, chapters 1-13 **completed**

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: nishu_shorna
Oh God...I am crying again...But u said na,this is ur way of fighting back...and I am keeping faith in u...looking forward to see more...And I am not scared...ArShi fan cant be afraid of sadness right???cause THEIR love will win in the end...

hi nishushorna, thank you for your trust and for coming back to read, 😳 and for being a true arshi fan... himmat dikhayi aapne like the two. 👏

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wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: indi52

don't ya know that this entire thing is created only to get you off his back, so that i can have him all to myself. i speak strictly of asr, of course.

i am supposed to take compliments graciously... never could, as i read your note, i am thinking, ok stylewa yes, but does indi have contentwa? let's see, a few more chapters and we'll know. in the meantime, you have talked about an update today, i am gleefully looking forward.

You lacking in content? Not true. Why do you say this?

Will be late at work. But must update today as promised!

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

^^^ thank you 😊.

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BarunDiwani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

OMG Indi!!!! what are you doing to me!!!!????!!!!!????

Ami's body going limp...Indi needs to step fwd and catch her!!...boy am i glad i waited till this morning to read this...well, wish i read the kiss part at night😉 and the last few lines

this morning.

Ok love you tons for the way you wrote the whole kiss scene, dhadkanien tez over her for sure!! and then "tum teek ho" *fainted*

and then those last mind numbing lines, i had to run to the bathroom to cry...thanks a lot! you make it that real. I don't know how much more i'm willing to let you torture me, but for now I want to read on b/c i know that Dr will say something totally differen right? hai na? hai na??

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BarunDiwani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: wiwy

You lacking in content? Not true. Why do you say this?
Will be late at work. But must update today as promised!

I agree whole heartily with my sauten Indi, we want to fight and fight!!!! how cruel you are to try and get us off his back?? Nahiiinn i say in true Indi style, we'll do anything, we'll even let you be the part he holds tightly on the curtain!!!!

btw, learn to take compliments dear, now is a good time to start 😉 only you would have me reading such sinful things!

Edited by BarunDiwani - 12 years ago

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wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: BarunDiwani

I agree whole heartily with my sauten Indi, we want to fight and fight!!!! how cruel you are to try and get us off his back?? Nahiiinn i say in true Indi style, we'll do anything, we'll even let you be the part he holds tightly on the curtain!!!!

btw, learn to take compliments dear, not is a good time to start 😉 only you would have me reading such sinful things!

Yes, Will do anything Indi! Bol diya to bol diya!😃

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coolbakes_Jalad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

it was written with such a feel of expressions... everything was perfect... had tears reading the line we tried our best but..

plz continue soon!! amazing writing!!

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Anumeha Khanna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

interesting ff..

liked the concept...

really catchy...

but i love ARHI together...

so plzz dont make them apart...

n arnav die...

cont. soon..

n pm me when update...

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: BarunDiwani
OMG Indi!!!! what are you doing to me!!!!????!!!!!????
Ami's body going limp...Indi needs to step fwd and catch her!!...boy am i glad i waited till this morning to read this...well, wish i read the kiss part at night😉 and the last few linesthis morning.

Ok love you tons for the way you wrote the whole kiss scene, dhadkanien tez over her for sure!! and then "tum teek ho" *fainted*

and then those last mind numbing lines, i had to run to the bathroom to cry...thanks a lot! you make it that real. I don't know how much more i'm willing to let you torture me, but for now I want to read on b/c i know that Dr will say something totally differen right? hai na? hai na??

hyuk hyuk, you're too cute. liked the kiss? nice? i had promised myself certain words would not be used: wet, met, plunged. what do you think... maine theek kiya na, ami ji?

doctor? which doctor? where? 😆.

thanks so much for reading. and crying in the bathroom? er... asr needs you around and alert... samjhi tum?

but tell me... did the kiss give dhak dhak. this is the bad part about writing it... my heart doesn't feel it. haw. but no matter, wiwy's chapter is up, i bet i can go dhak dhak there. 😳

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: BarunDiwani

I agree whole heartily with my sauten Indi, we want to fight and fight!!!! how cruel you are to try and get us off his back?? Nahiiinn i say in true Indi style, we'll do anything, we'll even let you be the part he holds tightly on the curtain!!!!

btw, learn to take compliments dear, now is a good time to start 😉 only you would have me reading such sinful things!

thanks ami, ok i will learn to take compliments, so you are a sinless soul that i corrupt? 😆