arshi ff: without you... thread #1, chapters 1-13 **completed**

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binimoti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: indi52

they made me cry with those terrifying pictures, thought i'd tell them it ain't that easy to scare an asr fan 😆 and so the story, thanks you for reading and despite your sadness, you are waiting for more... see told ya, can't scare us. 😳 hi nishu-shorna, thanks for stopping by.

Yeah the prologue was really emotional and what photos I have not seen them, could you paste the links if you have

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divsarunfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

nice concept i have cried😭 while reading. please update soon

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DurgaS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Indi, this prologue has been on my mind all night. Have been wondering how you are going to take it from here. Would you go back in time, work out all the story and somewhere in the middle you would arrive at this scene? Or would you take it from here and continue. Whatever it could be, this is going to be quite intense. I like your resolve of giving back to those who've been teasing us with those pics. As you said, this is going to be a test for Arshi's love. And also of our love for them.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: sohara
Indi I commented in the Blast post about my feelings.
Plz check it.
But I have to tell you again, that what a brilliant writing!
waiting for the next chapter.
You just can't let my ASR die.

your asr, sohara? nahiiin, he's mine too, 😆. glad you like. hope the feeling stays.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: binimoti

Yeah the prologue was really emotional and what photos I have not seen them, could you paste the links if you have

hi binimoti,

i saw them on a members only post but most of them are on lalit mohan's fb page, and the one i adapted comes from a picture taken by someone who was apparently at the shoot. thanks for reading and liking.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: DurgaS

Indi, this prologue has been on my mind all night. Have been wondering how you are going to take it from here. Would you go back in time, work out all the story and somewhere in the middle you would arrive at this scene? Or would you take it from here and continue. Whatever it could be, this is going to be quite intense. I like your resolve of giving back to those who've been teasing us with those pics. As you said, this is going to be a test for Arshi's love. And also of our love for them.

😆 i like all the routes you suggest. still mulling though... the intensity of a moment... it could happen to anybody. difference is in how one reacts.

Edited by indi52 - 12 years ago

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binimoti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: indi52

hi binimoti,

i saw them on a members only post but most of them are on lalit mohan's fb page, and the one i adapted comes from a picture taken by someone who was apparently at the shoot. thanks for reading and liking.

thanks

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RebeccaDaphne

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Wow Indi, this is really good! The story is so intense and sad...I can't wait to read more! 👏

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BarunDiwani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: indi52

BarunDiwani,

you are an asr fan, remember?... arnav singh raizada ko kissi ladki se koi faraq nahin padta... certainly not rambling indi ki writing se. so get here, dear one, read and tell me what works what doesn't. samjhi tum? (evil laugh)

yes ofcourse i'm an ASR fan but i can be two pankhas at once! if Arnav Singh Raizada read your "ramblings" he would most certainly hire you as his PA, since you understand him so well! then i would come visit you at AR everyday😃 ok imagination going wild. anyway, sharing the comment i made a few mins ago to your story on the blast thread

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😭😭😭

well i got here...only for you, i bit the bullet and read past the world going silent... and *sniff* I don't like being here *sniff"* *sniff* *sniff*...by "here" i mean where you left the story, i look forward with great anticipation as you decide to heal him...his heartbeats gave her life once, its her turn now, what's say?????? write the next part sooon okay???...like i said i don't like being stuck here.

I totally understand your need to explore these shots (which btw i had no idea were all over the net...God bless our blast thread!! it keeps me safe from a lot of things) and my you've done a great job starting the exploration. I've always admired your insight into these two, understanding them on a level that i don't even think the makers did...it always shows in your writing and especially in this one. That is exactly the way Khushi would react, "you can't handle his gussa" and worried about how he doesn't like being touched by strangers.👏 As i told you before, when you write, the words come alive and this was no less. It is almost too good succeeding in taking us where we don't want to go, on a Dehli Road at 3 pm.

I don't know how much (or little) i'm ready to explore this subject with you, should you choose to take this all the way to this place where i can't handle, i decided i i will add my 2 cents in the end for myselft as follows😊 its just a bad dream Khushi is having and she'll wake up to his caring voice "Khushi, Khush, Khushi,!" she opens her eyes, terror in them " Kya hua? dar gayee thi tum?" and then with tears in her eyes she's bury her herself in his arms, holing him tightly, being ever so grateful that she can hear his dhadkan while she rests her head on his chest.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

^^^ rebecca, delighted to see you here and thanks so much. now two blasters are at it, he eh, wiwy on her buildering and indi in blistering delhi heat. where are we all going. 😆

Edited by indi52 - 12 years ago