arshi ff: without you... thread #1, chapters 1-13 **completed**

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: princessunara

I have goosebumps reading this...omg i am so looking forward to this!!
this is like closure to all those disturbing images..cz like u said they r refusing to leave me too and i am glad to get to read this!!
really waiting to know how it unfolds...

thank you so much, princessunera,

that encourages me no end. hopefully, these images will stop bothering us, here's to asr and khushi.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: coolbakes
hey!!

i just read this! i must say its such a bold thing to write on this being an arshi fan!!!😉

the prologue was so beautifully worded and written with emotions expressed well and clear!!!😛

my heart broke when arnav was hit😭!!! it felt so real and its of course cause the way you described it!!

it was beautiful and would love to read more!! do write and do pm me if possible!!!!😳😳

i am glad to see a writer write such a different script!!!!!👏👏

looking forward to your next update

and i am sure as you start writing you will have more and more readers!!!! all the best with your first fan fiction though with the way you have written you already seem to be an expert!!

love always
coolbakes!!

hi coolbakes,

what can i say, i am thrilled to see your beautiful post. thanks for every word and those gifs... you do know how hard it gets to breathe when you see such things, i bet 😳. i shall pm you, of course. a very huge thank you for your lines in pink. the good wishes there are really touching. thanks and see you.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Dazee
that was tough to read...but compelling, as compelling as that haunting picture. Miracles happen, and they may take time, but faith can move mountains, no? and khushi has faith, and where her arnavji is concerned her faith is deeper than the deepest ocean and higher that the sky...so who knows what may happen or what lies ahead...?

daisy, you are here 😳, bhelcomes bhelcomes. death and asr, how much that shook us. then these pictures... i had to say nahiiin, not going numb, becoming jelly, dying inside... i have to look at it... asr would. all his life he struggled with a death he didn't want to look at, yet he did, in his own way. and when a gun was held to his head, he said, "khushi, i love you." that man can't be pushed under a heartlessly devised plot, can he? let's see what lies ahead.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: ...SaRun...
So indi di is now a fictioal writer too 😊.

I am so glad to see your growth in many departments through

IPK.

Coming to the story I never wanted to think about

thing like this in my wildest imaginations.

Those pics are a nightmare to watch.Though Barun was

looking at his very best in the scene.

But if you come up with the idea to write about it.

Then plz go ahead.

Your writing is as beautiful as ever.

Scene description is awesome.

It brought tears in my eye and heart started to ach.

Continue it I have faith in your love for ASR.

lizzie, lovely to see you here. thanks so much for that faith you show in the pink lines. hope i do live up to it. my love for asr 😃 oh it's one of the most dizzy making and happy parts of my life. see you soon.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: riti4u
🤗I will b unreserving soon...bt bookmarking...😊

edited,,😭, will add more

🤗 🤗 🤗 riti, thanks for reading and bookmarking... and achchhe bachche nahin 😭 hain. 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: mastermagician
God that was heart wrenching!!! Just by looking at Arnavis picture is enough to make me cry!!!!

mastermagician... amavis picture, nice way to put it. but we have diwali too on such a dark night... thanks so much for reading and your heartfelt comment.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: cute_sarun
you made me cry😭 continue soon

cutesarun, aww sorry to make you feel so bad. will update soon, thanks for reading. i am so happy to see new readers...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Katelyn

OMG Indi, the picture itself made my heart dropped and it was pounding with trepidation!! Also the title struck me with this uneasiness and unwanted fear for this is the direction we all never wanted to explore. My heart quivered and tears were breeming in my eyes as I continue to read! Because we are all attach to the characters and show, it is hard to bear the unthinkable.

Finally you've started a FF. Remember how we all encouraged you? Indi, you are an exceptional writer and I am always drawn to your style of writing. ⭐️ Hats off to you for being so brave in exploring this realm. 👏 We all need to be just as brave too. In addition, my curiosity is working overtime because I'm eager to know what direction your creative juices will flow. I'm hoping for a silver lining somewhere. I'm looking forward to the next part! Please do continue soon. Thank you so much, Indi, for this very special gift. 🤗 *Hands over my heart* I'm so very proud of you and you know you have my support!

katelyn, my dear dear blast buddy,

you bring music to the thread... awww. what a mad wonderful time we've shared, growing together... you all really goaded me to write and i thank you for that.

but tell you honestly, i am scared. fiction is a different thing, needs skills i may or may not have... yet after i saw these pictures, something in me said, what the... i needed to write it all down. i still have no idea what that "it" is, we'll find it as we go along. for the time being all i have are two fabulous characters created by writers/directors/unbelievably good actors... i thank them always for that. i just want to see where these two will go if that picture ever came up in their lives.

thank you so so much... without all your encouragement, i'd never have attempted fan fiction. 🤗 🤗

i hope your heart quivered gorgeously and you felt an aaah after it... hee hee i am cruel too.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: stg1
you always write really beautifully, and u have got a perfect handle here on arnav and khushi's inner monologues 😳 i love what you have written so far, but i am a chicken so would be too scared to read any more! (sorry) in my head, they go to the hospital, khushi is traumatised but arnav makes a full recovery and they lived happily ever after 😛

but i love the way you've begun and i can understand where this story came from, i am also annoyed with those pics being released but not so surprised - those who maybe feel irrelevant now will try to court publicity in other ways. but i like your way of responding to the 'threat' - good luck, and if you ever write a not-sad story i will be there! 😛

hi stg1,

i am so grateful for the lines in red bold. have we met before? thanks for reading. i am super chicken, so that character trait will no doubt colour the tale. 😆 ever after and happily... yeah where do we do that? do we do that? does it have to be on planet earth? ok, i like your story line, maybe i'll steal it. thanks o much for your words, all these comments really encourage a first time fan fiction writer.