arshi ff: without you... thread #1, chapters 1-13 **completed**

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mastermagician

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

God that was heart wrenching!!! Just by looking at Arnavis picture is enough to make me cry!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

you made me cry😭 continue soon

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Katelyn

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Posted: 12 years ago

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OMG Indi, the picture itself made my heart dropped and it was pounding with trepidation!! Also the title struck me with this uneasiness and unwanted fear for this is the direction we all never wanted to explore. My heart quivered and tears were breeming in my eyes as I continue to read!

Because we are all attach to the characters and show, it is hard to bear the unthinkable.

Finally you've started a FF.

Remember how we all encouraged you? Indi, you are an exceptional writer and I am always drawn to your style of writing. ⭐️

Hats off to you for being so brave in exploring this realm. 👏 We all need to be just as brave too. In addition, my curiosity is working overtime because I'm eager to know what direction your creative juices will flow. I'm hoping for a silver lining somewhere. I'm looking forward to the next part! Please do continue soon. Thank you so much, Indi, for this very special gift. 🤗 *Hands over my heart* I'm so very proud of you and you know you have my support!

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stg1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

you always write really beautifully, and u have got a perfect handle here on arnav and khushi's inner monologues 😳 i love what you have written so far, but i am a chicken so would be too scared to read any more! (sorry) in my head, they go to the hospital, khushi is traumatised but arnav makes a full recovery and they lived happily ever after 😛

but i love the way you've begun and i can understand where this story came from, i am also annoyed with those pics being released but not so surprised - those who maybe feel irrelevant now will try to court publicity in other ways. but i like your way of responding to the 'threat' - good luck, and if you ever write a not-sad story i will be there! 😛

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BarunDiwani

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Posted: 12 years ago

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My dear Indi!!!! so good to see your post on the forum...still can't read past the world going silent as i like my ASR loud and nasty...but hoping to get there...just wanted to come here and show my support as a BIG pankha 😉 of your writing, i'm over the moon excited that you finally decided to write. 🥳

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: arshilove14
nice concept i have cried while reading it please update soon

thank you, arshilove, i hope to get something in thsi weekend... a certain need to write. 😳

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 12 years ago

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OK my 2 cents for this Indi,First Let me ask you if I am not wrong you were one of those people who were really strongly against it and spoke with big volume about it and I remember each and every word of yours.Now after looking at the pic and reading this ,where you want us to follow and move its up to you but the thing is which I am surprised at this point ,it grabbed my heart the very same way ,the day this news was out by honeypriya's post.

I honestly has no courage or heart to see this and read it.Being very honest to you...but as I know you ,and know this you don't have either..so definitely after giving us this scare you have something nice store in it.Right...

My opinion doesn't matter so lets see where you are taking this story...but as I said I am scared with this title...

At the same time I know you are a brilliant writer ..you will turn this around...finger crossed😊

I am with you in this ,didn't speak or write anything because I am tired and aching internally so when I saw these pics just closing Lap top was the only option for me...

Edited by ArshiHamesha - 12 years ago

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Arnav_Khushifan
Wow Indrani. Big fan of your writing. Silent reader of your blast from past. Very chilling, my heart stopped for a second as I was reading it but I held on to my faith that it will be fine. Things always workout for these two. They after all have Devi maiya at their side. cannot imagine these two without eachother. Thanks for sharing. P.S. I was angry when the first post i saw Monday morning was those dreadful pictures😡😡 . I hope your story will give it a different ending then what they were trying to portray. Please continue soon.

hi rashmi,

so good to see you. you read blast? aww, thanks so much, we are all mad fans as you can tell. i like your strong strong instinct about the two. you know between the writers, directors, and that incredible set of actors they really created two characters we seem to know intimately... sometimes i think, i wonder how khushi reacts if a strange guy on the road checks her out... or does asr know that women get racing heartbeat the moment they see him (i think he does, the devil that he is 😆).

those pictures brought all my feelings up short and made me pause on a precarious edge... have to let them know, they don't scare me. see you soon.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha
OK my 2 cents for this Indi,First Let me ask you if I am not wrong you were one of those people who were really strongly against it and spoke with big volume about it and I remember each and every word of yours.Now after looking at the pic and reading this ,where you want us to follow and move its up to you but the thing is which I am surprised at this point ,it grabbed my heart the very same way ,the day this news was out by honeypriya's post.

I honestly has no courage or heart to see this and read it.Being very honest to you...but as I know you ,and know this you don't have either..so definitely after giving us this scare you have something nice store in it.Right...

My opinion doesn't matter so lets see where you are taking this story...but as I said I am scared with this title...

At the same time I know you are a brilliant writer ..you will turn this around...finger crossed😊

I am with you in this ,didn't speak or write anything because I am tired and aching internally so when I saw these pics just closing Lap top was the only option for me...

arshi 🤗,

my friend, and the one who gets so deep into asr khushi, you are here... i am thrilled. tell me, do we believe in this love or not? did it change our lives in ways we could never fathom or not? i could never play with this love, never reduce it to an easy way out with a mucked up story line when things got messy.

i will never forget the day priya broke the news. somewhere in that post, and all the other posts she wrote at that time are all my feelings about this whole thing. that line in the prologue which goes, "and a silence fell across the world... well, that's how i felt while reading about it...

and after all these months someone actually puts these pictures on the net? i have tried to look away every time, but suddenly a thought within... what if i looked at instead... went right in, and found what is inside...

asr and khushi, when mortal danger lurks, how will they react, evolve, find more and more.

i am not a brilliant writer, though, 😳, i am a rambler, and the feelings of these two i just love rambling through. thanks for being here. my first story, really, i am scared, super nervous.

Edited by indi52 - 12 years ago

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: BarunDiwani
My dear Indi!!!! so good to see your post on the forum...still can't read past the world going silent as i like my ASR loud and nasty...but hoping to get there...just wanted to come here and show my support as a BIG pankha 😉 of your writing, i'm over the moon excited that you finally decided to write. 🥳

BarunDiwani,

you are an asr fan, remember?... arnav singh raizada ko kissi ladki se koi faraq nahin padta... certainly not rambling indi ki writing se. so get here, dear one, read and tell me what works what doesn't. samjhi tum? (evil laugh)