Khushi's OS: If Only - Page 2

That is something we learnt from Khushi- to be happy even in the worst of the times.
Nice OS !

wooow that was very emotional

Beautiful, Helee!!! Loved it... broke my heart...

what a heart wrenching os...totally loved it...

Very Well written! The way you described Khushi's pain is heartwrenching!!
I want to hit Arnav on his head hard so that he gets back his sense.😡

Convert this into a SS if possible..

Very well written OS!! I loved the IF Only ending part.. ASR can be ruthless indeed :(

Now that I am fully awake and my brain is functioning I wanted to add some comments. I loved how you mentioned her conscious about her hair vs. the fashionable hair in ASR's world.

The flower path scene was heartbreaking indeed. She's so scared of walking on the flowers vs. getting hurt. The scene where she feels her husbands presence and then only see that he has disgust in his eyes for her is quite sad indeed.

This definitely has potential for an SS.. Superb job!!

Originally posted by: Anarocksick

This was beautifully written. I absolutely loved reading it and was taken back to the IPK days. I was a bit shocked when it was revealed that Arnav had asked her to be a waitress for the evening, but it all made sense when you mentioned the before-Aakash's marriage part. It was a sort of revenge on his part. He wanted to hurt her.

Thanks for this.

I don't usually do this, but I would love it if your continue this and convert it into as SS? Just a suggestion.

Cheers.

Ana

Originally posted by: ashw99

That was really emotional Helee.
I could not expect Arnav to behave and degrade khushi to this extend atleast not in public.
Could feel khushi's pain her urge to gain loving husband rather, only if she could re-do all the "if only's" she went through.
Thanks for pm loved it.

Originally posted by: cheesemad

what a heart wrenching os...totally loved it...

poor khushi felt bad for her...stupid stupid arnav.😡

you described khushi's emotions so well...

very well written👍🏼