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chibisuke

@chibisuke

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Preethi

@blackdove

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Posted: 12 years ago

So Awesome...

I really feel like crying...seeing Khushi's state...

even in the show...Her state was so sad at this time...and i hated Arnav for doing that...But even he suffered didn't he????Even he loved her still...

You should make this as a ff...

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Vithagan2304

@Vithagan2304

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

jus loved d emotions of khushi:)
amazing update:)

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Moumita Mukherjee

@fangurrl

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

it was worth reading!!
really awesome!!
i felt bad for KHUSHI!!
even in the show..
ARNAV mistreated her and i hated him for that..
you can continue this!!
would love to read further!!

Edited by tushi0310 - 12 years ago

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Nicky saluja

@Nickysweet

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

😊 really heartwenching OS

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Anisha

@-Aniisha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

wow beautifully written dear 😊 all her emotions were nicely portrayed...

loved it to the core...

keep writing

thanks for the PM

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ashw99

@ashw99

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

That was really emotional Helee.
I could not expect Arnav to behave and degrade khushi to this extend atleast not in public.
Could feel khushi's pain her urge to gain loving husband rather, only if she could re-do all the "if only's" she went through.
Thanks for pm loved it.

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Niki

@..Enchantress..

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

Very nicely portrayed Khushi's pain.
Poor Khushi, can't even imagine Arnav stooping so low to degrade her self-respect.
Thanks for the PM.

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PANCHI__pOOJa

@Panchi__Doll

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

nicely described khushi's pov...ya u can make ss of diz..

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#10

This was beautifully written. I absolutely loved reading it and was taken back to the IPK days. I was a bit shocked when it was revealed that Arnav had asked her to be a waitress for the evening, but it all made sense when you mentioned the before-Aakash's marriage part. It was a sort of revenge on his part. He wanted to hurt her.

Thanks for this.

I don't usually do this, but I would love it if your continue this and convert it into as SS? Just a suggestion.

Cheers.

Ana