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Nkayani

@Nkayani

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Wow that was such an amazing update. It was soo emotional.
Plz write a sequal to it. I realy want to read more.

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PhoenixTears

@PhoenixTears

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

😭Sad aww, my heart goes to Khushi. Exceptionally well written, a very emotional update! Very different from your other stories I have read till now and you have done a great job in this genre too, superb!

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Sunara

@princessunara

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

it is so beautifully written!

takes me back to those days when behind every smile her eyes looked pained, when after every smile that she plastered across her face to show she was indifferent she turned to the side and wiped the tears that wouldn't stop...n yet still would give all she had to make any1 else happy, be it the very people who kept wounding her..

loved reading it..

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Nupur

@nupsiii

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

that was the most beautiful emotional os i have ever read. You described her feelings so so well. Please lemme if yu write another ss os or ff

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: P4rveen12
Wow this was quite a different take to what you normally write, all I can say amazing writing.

The update was very emotional and heart breaking.

Felt so sorry for khushi, he actually made her a waitress.

The last line was sad if only she had not fallen in love with Arnav.

IF ONLY Arnav had a brain and he did not force her into the marriage.

Loved you note at the end, very wise words.

Thanks for the PM xx

Thank you so much!

The note was because I wasn't sure if people would 'accept' a sad story/OS. And well, it is the truth.

We can never control who we fall in love with, or when we fall in love..

Arnav might grow a heart if I choose to continue this as a short story or something 😉

Thanks for the comment!

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Nkayani
Wow that was such an amazing update. It was soo emotional.
Plz write a sequal to it. I realy want to read more.

Thank you!

I might write something to continue it.. maybe a series of OS, or a short story or something..

Thanks for the encouragement!

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: PhenoixTears
😭Sad aww, my heart goes to Khushi. Exceptionally well written, a very emotional update! Very different from your other stories I have read till now and you have done a great job in this genre too, superb!

Aahh!

Thank you!

You assuaged my fears!

I will try and write more, maybe in other genres too.. Lets see!

Thanks for the vote of confidence!

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: princessunara
it is so beautifully written!
takes me back to those days when behind every smile her eyes looked pained, when after every smile that she plastered across her face to show she was indifferent she turned to the side and wiped the tears that wouldn't stop...n yet still would give all she had to make any1 else happy, be it the very people who kept wounding her..

loved reading it..

Thank you for this wonderful comment! I wish I had the strength that Khushi always had, no matter what.. despite her chirpy and carefree exterior, she is a highly mature person..

😊

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: nupsiii
that was the most beautiful emotional os i have ever read. You described her feelings so so well. Please lemme if yu write another ss os or ff

Aah!

I can only thank you for commending me so highly!

Just add me to your buddy list, I will let you know whenever I write something new!

Thanks, again 😊