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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Absolutely beautiful!😃

That was lovely! : )

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queenie11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

I loved reading this - really great job

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Electric_BuBBle

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

It was beautifully written! I loved how Arnav regretted! Ugh, hated Anjali's words! Thanks for the PM! :D

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Electric_BuBBle

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Part 2: Aww, poor Khushi! Feel so bad for her! :D

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

wonderful short story, I love how you described Arnavs pain, i hope he realises the wrong he has done soon

great work !

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velangini

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

both the parts are amazing,out of this world👏

first part full of arnav's thoughts,his pain,regret,you captured his raw angst in words so beautifully.great job👏

second part of khushi,how she dreamt of prince and how she got monster,it was pure love and innocense .she is still wishing for his love😭very well written.continue soon and thanks for pm

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@debby_11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

really very beautifully written..u shud continue this ...

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--Siva--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

That was lovely dear!!

I needed some dose of angst actually!! And it was well served by u..

Cant wait for next par, really clueless of what the ending would be!

Thanks for the PM.

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Minnat

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

loved it...

plz update soon...n plz plz no sad ending...

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starlight06

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Posted: 13 years ago

#50

This is beautiful! You've described each of their emotions so so well!!! Awesome!

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