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sun_shine_girl

@sun_shine_girl

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

What a beautiful way of writing Gargee. You have woven these songs so magically in your story.

Khushi and Arnav, both reminiscing, both hurting...I did not know pain could be described so beautifully.

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

This summarizes the last few months of the story in a very intense way to the bare essence.

She has been damaged by him and his family. His culpability is the greatest because he had been gifted by her with her heart and lifehead he has not valued these gifts from the heavens that he had received.

Now he needs to make this right and he needs to find her and show her that she is the most valued relationship of his life.

Please continue the story and show his redemption that heals her by showing her the lengths he will go to for her. She deserves nothing less. She needs to see that she is his topmost relationship, even higher than his Di now.

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nareshSV

@nareshSV

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Oh really u cant leave it like that xontinue soon and I had ters in my eyes while reading this it was ttoo intense emotional...

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Tia.0

@Tia.0

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Ohhh.. So heart wrenching and poignant...

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Frances

@Punkin22

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Simply wonderful. You expressed pain so well; I could feel her sorrow. Please finish with them together. Have a good day dear.

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

well written bursting with emotion. well done

xxx

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

that was so heartbreaking and sad and please tell me you have a part three that was awesome writing loved it that was fantastic loved it thanks for the pm

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

wow that was great

thanks for the pm

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mankhush

@mankhush

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Wow. Simply put. This is was just awesome

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purplekid

@purplekid

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

That was so touching, and i love how you made Payal a pivotal character rather than someone who stands on the sidelines... Thanks for the pm, and please continue! Can you make it a three shot? 😉