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-FarwiiDobaara-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Omg..!!! You described each and every scene soo vividly...! I could just imagine Arnav in a dreadful situation *the first part*
to see their emotions portrayed soo well was just beautiful!!
Heart wrenching </3

Continue soon

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Amy

@mz.brar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Oh wow, that was so gut wrenchingly beautiful.

"She'd wanted someone sweet.

He was diabetic."

Omg I just love this line.

It feels both complete and incomplete at the same time. There's a part of me that want him to track her down and hold her in his arms to take away the pain, we've all felt the pain of unrequested love, or the "heartbreak" from a silly high school crush and at the time if feels like the world's ended and all that left is the pain; so for Khushi to lose everything, her family, her heart and her fight to live. Learning to trust again is gona be a hell of a job for her…….But of the flip side it's such a realistic ending……idk you've left me speechless (YET AGAIN!)

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kohli4ever

@kohli4ever

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Wow.. Uwrite amazingly.. Absolutely beautifully written...

The pain khushi suffered was unbearable to ven read... The poor soul..

Plz continue soon n plz pm me updates...added u as buddy..

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ArhiIPKKND

@ArhiIPKKND

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

wonderful ...so beautifully written...i like angsty too at times...and this is angsty at its best...both their points of view...so emotional...so true...so sad...yet so unavoidable in a way...

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hilly

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Awh Khushi ! amazing portrayal from both the characters. :)

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Just read both parts! it was seriously heart wrenching!
Superb!

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rashgirl000

@rashgirl000

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

WOW. very emotional. well written.👏. arnav's emotions were portrayed the best. almost could feel what he felt. almost ofcourse. pls continue soon.

Edited by rashgirl000 - 13 years ago

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boisecrazy

@boisecrazy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

loved both episodes...very detailed emotional expressions thoroughly captured!!!!pl continue...

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ayushma

@aycma98

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

wow... loved it!!!... it's heart breaking...

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@.1.1.1.1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#60

brilliantly written, loved it make it a three or a 100th shot for all i care is for u to update and update soon😉

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