Arnav-Khushi OS~Forgiving (on current track!) - Page 3

Originally posted by: ---Pari---

Waise, it's great to meet u!! :)

this is the first OS i am reading on ArShi... Thank you for the OS..
Well sanju... I don't knw abt kushi but i was surprised after reading this OS... You have written it well... awww...such a beautiful scene on this beautiful couple.. now i am a fan of you yaar..
i was visualizing the whole scene my dear friend...
"Does it hurt'?" Arnav asked finally... awww.. .it was a heart tuching line..
wohooo...at last he said sorry to kushi..very nice dear...
great job.. keep rocking.. i need a help from u sanju.. when ever u update such a lovely OS in this loving couple.. can u PM me??

Originally posted by: priya_2491

It's great to meet you too ,Pari🤗. Will you be writing anymore ,os,ff or ss?

if I get any ideas, I will definately do so!! 😳

heyya i luvd ur OS . it was jus as i imagined it. pls dont stop writing!!⭐️

Originally posted by: zee10

this is the first OS i am reading on ArShi... Thank you for the OS..
Well sanju... I don't knw abt kushi but i was surprised after reading this OS... You have written it well... awww...such a beautiful scene on this beautiful couple.. now i am a fan of you yaar..
i was visualizing the whole scene my dear friend...
"Does it hurt'?" Arnav asked finally... awww.. .it was a heart tuching line..
wohooo...at last he said sorry to kushi..very nice dear...
great job.. keep rocking.. i need a help from u sanju.. when ever u update such a lovely OS in this loving couple.. can u PM me??

Omggg!! I feel honoured that you've written such a comment for me!! 😳 thank u so so sooo much! 🤗 n wow! I have a fan! 😲 you've made me so happy yaar! N of course I will PM u!! Thx once more! 🤗

Originally posted by: hiccup

heyya i luvd ur OS . it was jus as i imagined it. pls dont stop writing!!⭐️

Awwhh! Thanks a ton for the encouragement yaar! 🤗

Originally posted by: Traxy101

Very nice OS

Thank u! 🤗

Originally posted by: MeetPremeer

nice one dear
Loved it

Thanks a bunch! 🤗

I really suck with my unreservings 🤣 but this OS compelled me to!😛

PAAARRREEEIIIHHH🤗
DUH! i have seriously no words to tell how much of a brilliant and extremely talented writer you are! That was one of the best OS's ive ever read! to be really honest, ive left reading ffs now mostly! i just suppose, maybe my interest in them has faded away, or ive gone tired, but this OS was cUHMPLEEEHTEELY Awesome my woman! AHHH cant be jus expressed in few words! first damn woman you are a roking writer! the way you write, the way every scene, emotion is portrayed by you, is just flawless and beautiful. each and very word of this OS was jus really very beautiful and captivating! the very first word hooked me, and my interest just grew with each passing word, and i was totally hooked and mesmerised till the end! that is the effect of your writing! too wonderful! <3 there was simplicity, and utter beauty, that is the most beautiful combination, yet too difficult to find, but your work had it, and it was amazingly done! You are defo writing more and more! Im badly addicted to your writng now!! haha feels like obsessed about it, WRITEE MOREE!😆😳 The current track, and the whole scenario was jus really beautiful! the way you took it <3 Arnav's guilt, his feelings, his inner turmoil was outstandingly written, and he was missing Khushi EEKKKS :P OMGG when she bumped with his car i had this stupid big smile plastered over my lips, lol i was smiling so foolishly, and he looked, at her and she was our beloved khushi kumaari gupta😛😆😆 I loved the connection that related them - museebat!🤣 problems are totally arnav-khushilicious! 😛😆 then her reactions were so good, as if i could totally picture it! i jus enjoyed reading it tooo muchhh!!! :D ;P Their dialouges!!!! UFF! i simply loved their convos! ahhh! i was smiling reading them! typical thm :PP they were so perfectly written! Her FALLL!!! EEEKKKS! :P their eyes locked, her fragility captured in his strong arms UFFF YU KEEELEEED MEEEHHH! that was sooo hawt! <3 loved that scene, and that moment of differnt emotions! awww i loved his caring side! HE CARES FOR HER SO MUCHHH<3 Ahh i so love ASR! OMGGG the apology scene was totally rockinggg <33 the way he said it, omg he had so much problem saying it!🤣 and her shock totally fits in!🤣 loved the last bitt, his eagerness for her to join back, and the way she teased him bout the apology was too excellent lol, his red face😛😆😆 and her last dialouge!!!

Oh why did it enddd!!!!! :P :O I really really loved the OS! seriously more than words can say!!!! woman WRITE MOREEE NAA! im addicted|! <3
this wa just the perfect OS! simply adore it nd your writing!

Love ya,
Rida😳