Arnav-Khushi OS~Forgiving (on current track!)

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@SK1991

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: ---Pari---
Thanks a ton dear!😳

any time ya...

u should carry on...😃

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Kruthi

@IshyMishi

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Very nice one Pariii...
I liked it

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Hey Sanju...🤗

It was not sucky what so ever!!! In fact it was excellent. 👏👏

I loved the whole build up..Arnav's thoughts.. the fact that it was Khushi who came infront of his car..the drive to the hospital..the cute exchange at the hospital!!! It was all great..!!

But...my favourite was definitely the eye lock, when they got out of the car...❤️❤️

And then to top it off...he carried her in!!!!😍😍

Fantastic hun...pure genius!!!

Hope you write more!!!!

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I don't know! U tell me! :D ;)

@-Sanjana-

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: SK1991

any time ya...

u should carry on...😃

Awwhhh... thanks for ur sweet wrds yaar!

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I don't know! U tell me! :D ;)

@-Sanjana-

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: IshyMishi
Very nice one Pariii...
I liked it

Thank you so much! 🤗

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I don't know! U tell me! :D ;)

@-Sanjana-

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower
Hey Sanju...🤗
It was not sucky what so ever!!! In fact it was excellent. 👏👏

I loved the whole build up..Arnav's thoughts.. the fact that it was Khushi who came infront of his car..the drive to the hospital..the cute exchange at the hospital!!! It was all great..!!

But...my favourite was definitely the eye lock, when they got out of the car...❤️❤️

And then to top it off...he carried her in!!!!😍😍

Fantastic hun...pure genius!!!

Hope you write more!!!!

Goshh! Wow! Such a long comment! thank u thank u thank u!!! Will definately write more!! N Lol!😳 Like many ppl, I am also a besharam! had to include that carrying in part!😆😉

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ClaraOswald

@ClaraOswald

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Gosh , such an awesome os . I don't think its sucky,I think it is absolutely brilliant. I just loved how you wrote the built up of Arnav saying sorry to Khushi. It was briliant .👏

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I don't know! U tell me! :D ;)

@-Sanjana-

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: priya_2491

Gosh , such an awesome os . I don't think its sucky,I think it is absolutely brilliant. I just loved how you wrote the built up of Arnav saying sorry to Khushi. It was briliant .👏

omggg! really...?! Thank u so much!!!😳😳