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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

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Posted: 7 years ago

#31

Risha, this was very beautifully penned down. Pardon me, for not typing out a detailed reply. My schedule is crazy at this moment. I am lucky that I peeped in and got this. You have done great.😊

Dear readers, who commented on previous page - I am so sorry that I couldn't revert back to you but know that I have read every comment and I absolutely appreciate it. You know that right? I will really try replying back by weekend. Thank you for dropping by and appreciating.😳

Love and hugs

-Harshada

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Krishi

@Black_Maniac

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Posted: 7 years ago

#32

Superfast Risha Di 😆

Let me read :P

Sorry for my weird habit of disappearing randomly 😆

Risha Di, it was a very fitting and great continuation to the story.

Tbh, when I saw Shivaay asking if anything's wrong with Anika, I got upset that he could conclude that but when he said how he didn't want people to talk about her, I just fell a little more for him. Of course, the fact that people will find things wrong with Anika only :/

A very well handled plot, I loved reading this one. Anika had her own insecurities about Shivaay not accepting her anymore and Shivaay wanting to protect her. You justified his earlier actions very well.

Anika confronting him was great, her reaction very Anika-ish. I loved the whole sequence. And then the very open ended touch with Om overhearing them.

I loved all of it 🤗

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

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Posted: 7 years ago

#33

The second part is too emotional...Never expected this twist...but you beautifully portrayed their emotions... the way you described Annika's feelings and her way of supporting shivaay... its superb

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kashishsr

@kashishsr

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Posted: 7 years ago

#34

Firstly, can I just say, beautifully written😃!

I really admire you tackling such a serious topic and that too keeping your characters in mind. You gave them reactions to circumstances that I really understood. The way your piece fits with what was written before is brilliant. Your ending was just wow - leaves a lot of scope for the next writer. I feel like you didn't shy away from a real issue and that is always commendable.

Again a great job!😃

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Ms.Lizzie

@Ms.Lizzie

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Posted: 7 years ago

#35

Very well handled

A sensitive topic, but you have written brilliantly

Ending was perfect

They will be helped by their constant support family

Awesome

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Khidki

@Khidki

Sparkler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#36

That's The Twist!

Amazing! Like everyone above said you really pulled that topic very well.

Love how you kept Anika and Shivaay true to their characters in the situation.

Angry SSO and broken Anika💔

For Shivaay its really a big thing. A person who has been affected by NKK and takes pride in himself and loves his wife so much, an so hi family. Feel him trapped from all sides!

Loved the update.

Awaiting the conclusion to this tale eagerly!!!!!

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Risha

@--Risha--

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Posted: 7 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: IAdoreYou
Risha, this was very beautifully penned down. Pardon me, for not typing out a detailed reply. My schedule is crazy at this moment. I am lucky that I peeped in and got this. You have done great.😊
Dear readers, who commented on previous page - I am so sorry that I couldn't revert back to you but know that I have read every comment and I absolutely appreciate it. You know that right? I will really try replying back by weekend. Thank you for dropping by and appreciating.😳

Love and hugs
-Harshada

Thanks! Was a bit nervous since this is a sensitive topic and people here tend to be touchy. 😆 Glad you enjoyed it

Will answer everyone else in a bit

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

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Posted: 7 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: --Risha--

Thanks! Was a bit nervous since this is a sensitive topic and people here tend to be touchy. 😆 Glad you enjoyed it

Will answer everyone else in a bit

You didn't have to be nervous. Quite a many people seemed to haven't liked first part but they did like second. (Can see those in hits whom I did not see earlier) That is your achievement Risha :)

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Himanshi

@Blink_Cat

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#39

its wow, so beautifully written n emotional too,,

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Shri

@Shri_12

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Posted: 7 years ago

#40

I had guessed Annika being infertile after reading the first part. But this was also somewhat expected by me. But those words were bang on 👏. For me what unexpected was the last line. Om knows the secret. Kab kaha kaise would hopefully be answered in the next part. What twist it brings would be interesting. Do you know who's going to write the last part? Would try to guess according.

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