T & T Tales! (Shivika)pART 3-p12-Through Thick & Thin (complet - Page 2

Originally posted by: IAdoreYou

Krishi - Don't worry. I am not leaving you wondering this time. You know how my stories are, don't you? My characters don't do what they do ainvayi😆 Will be sharing entire plot that had come in my mind for this, by tonight. ❤️

Thank you so much everyone for dropping by!

Hugs

-Harshada

Originally posted by: Khidki

A very interesting and heartfelt beginning!

Love the way you crafted their relationship.

A few hints as I perceive here and there.

I would say this is a perfect cliff-hanger for the next writer!

Loved it❤️

The small elements of awww...that you always put

My fav has to be two scenes-

One where she hugs him.

Second where he says sorry.

Lovely!😳

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

intriguing start..

Originally posted by: kashishsr

I love that you've left this very open-ended. Adoption and even having kids in general is a really deep matter and I really admire that you've not over-simplified it. My heart did break a little for Anika, but obviously something is really up with Shivaay. Kids is an issue between many normal couples and I love the way you've begun to explore it. Excited to see where the next writer takes it.

Originally posted by: Black_Maniac

This is beautiful Harshu ❤️

You were great with the whole complexity of the issue.

Their inner conflict is very convincing.

Their turmoil is outlined pretty well.

Now this has me curious 😆

Originally posted by: chek

This was so beautiful!!! Thank you:3 I am really looking forward to how the next writer takes this forward, but please do share your plot that you thought of, on India Forums as a short story, a few shots, however you like it. I love your stories and always look forward to them. Would love to know what u really had in mind for the upcoming bit:)

P.s. I love how this 'twists and turns' is crafted. So unique and new and something with a bang, yet so beautiful and simple:)

Thanks guys:) the real CVs can't do much, but you bunch do great stuff. Much more greater thsn the actual writer:) hahha, no offense.

Originally posted by: IAdoreYou

Well, I already replied you no?😆 I get excited when it comes to you. Thanks again. I said, I will tell you the plot line no? But I won't tell you now.😆 I plan to write it by next weekend and then directly send you to read.😳

Originally posted by: Black_Maniac

@bold mujhe sharam aa rahi hai☺️ 🤣

Mujhe pata tha itni jaldi nahi pata chalegi😆

Jaldi bhejna, I am waiting 😳

To the previous one:

I know, everything you write can be connected at any point 😆 Ab I am even more curious :D

Originally posted by: IAdoreYou

Stop blushing and go, study.😆 I am hell tired. Everything is so exhausting at this point. Have so many works and this health sickness tires me every now and then.

I am just willing these few months to pass soon so that I can get rid of my college and this CVST thing.

Will send you very soon. The plot is so of my type as you said. I can't resist writing it.

Curiosity at its peak huh😆

I wrote a synopsis of a brand new story today which falls in Mystery/thriller/ and more fantasy genre.🤪 I was damn excited when I wrote it but now, I think I need to work a lot to get it into a story.