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Risha

@--Risha--

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Posted: 7 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: palakdeepkaur29
This proves only one thing that life becomes easier when our partner is there to hold us whenever we fall . This was beautifully written Risha . Congatulations on that 👏👏

@Blod - that's so well put <3 Thank you :)

Originally posted by: jaansahiba
Woaho lady!! You nailed it!! Everything seemed so reasonable. That was so good.
I always have liked khannaji and today, I love him. His interference in the story was so wonderful. And when u made Om's entry in the end, I just couldn't control my excitement.
Somebody plz do update soonish.
Abhi

I toh love Khanna jee. Seems like lately, I can't write anything without using him as a plot-moving character 😆 Thank you! Someone else will update this next to next week :)

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Miss_Observer

@Miss_Observer

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Posted: 7 years ago

#52

Call me weird but I thought was something entirely different not exactly the same thing but I knew its not going to be about SSO being an orphan, anyway it's a very nice chapter and something we can totally get in the show (which is highly unlikely nowaday, though I don't want a pregnancy track), but we all know it's not going to happen but I just hope the next writer do some justice to the story

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Risha

@--Risha--

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: chek
W O W. This is unique. Something new and breaks the stereotype!! It was beautifully written and feels great to be reading something different and not against the woman:)
Love.

Thank you so much. I'm happy the risk paid off

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Risha

@--Risha--

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Posted: 7 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: itzMYattitude
lovely story yar
m so loving this multiple writers with different perception taking foreword the story
n how beautifully the parts are connected

beautiful piece of writing

Yes, its a very unique and interesting concept. Thank you.

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
interesting twist..

Thank you

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Risha

@--Risha--

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Posted: 7 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Miss_Observer
Call me weird but I thought was something entirely different not exactly the same thing but I knew its not going to be about SSO being an orphan, anyway it's a very nice chapter and something we can totally get in the show (which is highly unlikely nowaday, though I don't want a pregnancy track), but we all know it's not going to happen but I just hope the next writer do some justice to the story

Thanks for the kind words!

@bold - lol, not that Im doing khud kee tareef but the writers no longer have the balls to do something like this to their precious SSO (pun not intended)

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Miss_Observer

@Miss_Observer

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Posted: 7 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: --Risha--

Thanks for the kind words!

@bold - lol, not that Im doing khud kee tareef but the writers no longer have the balls to do something like this to their precious SSO (pun not intended)

It's suupee sad and annoying that we don't get good, meaningful scenes anymore. Why is gul so obsessed with anda and groupbaaazi, women is wayyy to egoistic

P.s. do you think if IB didn't go cray cray, milta kuch aesa kuch (still unlikely right?)

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Rohini

@ithihaas

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Posted: 7 years ago

#57

Harshada,

No one can write the emotional stuff like you do... 👏

and as always I am bowled over by the shot that you have written...the flow, the emotions, the exchange of dialogues every thing was very smooth...

and I know even if you write a one shot, that in itself will be a complete story !

I am looking forward to how the next writer takes this !

-Rohini

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Rohini

@ithihaas

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Posted: 7 years ago

#58

@Risha,

That was lovely continuation to what Harshada has written and I didn't feel like some other writer has written it... the story and the flow seemed continuous...

The twist is some thing unexpected and I am glad that you had incorporated this even though you had other ideas and it did perfectly fit in the scenario at the end of the part 1.

I loved the turmoil portrayed for Shivaay and also the reactions of Annika as soon as she knew it and the way she consoled him was nicely done.

Cannot wait to read the final update to this story !

@Annika,

Thank you for bringing in such a different way for writers to put forward their skills..

this reminded me of the MasterChef cooking competition where the contestants were divided into group of 3 and then first one started the dish and then next one had to continue it after a stipulated dish and finally the third one completed it.. and each one didn't know what the other was doing .. they just had to continue from where the first cook left off... and it was fun to see them do that..

and now when the same is being done for writers, its just feels great !

-Rohini

Edited by ithihaas - 7 years ago

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Ruchi

@Rachna.KG

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Posted: 7 years ago

#59

Risha, I am so impressed that you ventured out and wrote something which many don't even attempt. This whole idea of twists and turns is phenomenal and first author & you, what a team you both are.

I loved this concept and it is one area which needs to be addressed by Indian Tele. Recently watched a documentary on this issue about men born in 1970's and I was shocked to hear that this problem is of epic proportion. Would love to see IB addressing this...but then it's too much to ask for. Glad you addressed it and it's written so well.