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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: perFICtionist.

nooo! my eyes are red and swollen.. so beautiful and wistful! The way you brought out the power of fate from the very beginning till the end! how it overpowered them all and brought them together and how it cruelly snatched away everything all over again. But... the GOSO you created is more powerful! She takes all the thorns thrown her way by fate and yet she stands up inspite and despite, uncaring of her bleeding feet she treads on! She fights her demons every day and every night and yet she puts on a smile! that right there is a fighter and a winner... God often reserves the best battles for the ones most deserving and Gauri has always been her Shankarji's favourite.. Her faint smile at the forlorn night sky remembering her jatadhari reflects on how she decides to courageously fight on and not give up! cuz she knows and believes Om would never give up on her. And so GOSO remains... unbowed and undefeated.👏



Adishree,

Love your comment. So so so wonderfully analysed.

I am huge believer in Fate, the Higher Power which can give and take as it pleases. So much fickle yet so so powerful.

Your description of GOSO is my own understanding of her.

GOSO's faith in fate is unshakable. Hers is something that will move the proverbial mountains. Her love for her husband, the love from her husband will always be her strength.
She fights her demons, gives in to the numbness, the darkness, the loneliness but she wont GIVE UP.. Ever. And there lies GOSO in all her glory!
Ananya had asked me to reverse the situation in my next write up, and i had been thinking what will Om do? The only conclusion i can come is Om would give up! Because for Om love would always be a weakness. Gauri will be his vulnerability! Om in this situation would either retreat in his mind going completely crazy or will chose to end it all. I cant imagine Om being what GOSO is in this OS. (this is for you Ananya)

Thanks for reading it dear. I immensely enjoyed reading your views on it.
Edited by Priya_Iyer - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: sree10

I am crying yaar...too sad...my heart's breaking.. . can't stand it. Its so beautiful and sad



Awwie I am sorry to hear that you cried. :)

Thank you for reading. :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Diii...i cried...no words...itz heart touching...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Such a beautifully written OS! It's heart-breaking to see G suffering. I must have cried a river reading this 😭
Thank-you for sharing this with us. Looking forward to reading more of your stories :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: SRKisLove

Priya🤗

You already know my views and suggestions, so I'll just say, thank you for posting this here. I'm glad you were convinced to share it with everyone.

Great writing👏

P.S. I don't mind an angsty one next, and you already know my idea.😉



Thanks dear. :)

And yes I know your suggestions. The reversing the situation one has been on my mind the whole day. I personally will never write it coz if she dies, he will too. Thats my understanding of him and her both, like I mentioned in the reply to adishree.

So your other suggestion it is. 😆 though before that a happy OS likhna padega! Too many pms saying they cant control the tears. 😭 I am feeling terrible for posting this. 😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ok heartbreak in a post courtesy of a fabulous writer. Take a bow girl... then hold your ears and apologise for making me tear up... then promise you'll do it again. Well done on this piece, it's so real. I'm devastated but you had me hooked from the first word. Only next time can we go for something a little more cheerful. You gave us a bittersweet melancholy in this... now how about some super sweet jalebi dessert of a happily ever after story? Your writing style seems flawless, so don't ever doubt it again. Keep it up, and thank you for the PM. Make sure to PM me next time you post anything too.❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#27
Heartbreakingly beautiful
Wow wonderful OS even though a sad one
You described each feeling so wo derfully
Keep up the good work
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ur writing is fab this was so sad but brilliant u could feel gauris pain i had to take a break in btwn reading this is so sad. Really lovely work keep it up.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Why did you make me cry?😭 this was darn emotional! Gauri does not deserve this😭 but this was very well written, i must say! I have only cried on very few fics in IF and this is one of em. well done❤️
Edited by KrazyKripzy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30
Oh my my .. a beautifully etched creation of the most beloved couple...you are a fab writer Priya.. I could feel her pain through you writing...such a beautiful couple .. so delicate yet so strong ..no pomp and show yet takes your breath away every time they appear in front of you...Coming back to your creation..I could literally picturise Gauri living yet not living in his absence..Her pain , her loss.. felt so real.. Beautiful!!Kudos to you.. keep writing more:)loved it

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