Tum Bin..! A RiKara OS - Page 2

You know what..I always like the "Happily ever after" type things..but you made me fall in love with this one...it's so heart wrenching yet beautiful..I'm just worst in expressing my feelings..and after reading this I really don't know how to make you understand how it felt..can't say anything more than that...kuch aur kaha toh pakka ro dungi...bass keep writing...
*HUGS*

Piyu darling🤗
So you did..likh hi dali..i am very happy that you wrote this..i always like your post or analysis on rikara and i knew that if you will write a shot on rikara that will also be wonderfull...but i had no idea that have an amazing ability and writing skills..you did great job darling👏
Ammm...i have nothing to say about it yar.. i have zero to express my feelings..i hope samjh jayegi my darling😳
You know goosebumps aa gye mere while reading this..and i was crying while reading..see abhi bhi😭😭
She lost her everything in a moment..her unborn baby, her loving caring hubby, her hapiness and her family ..everything..
The moment when their car smashed..heartbreaking moment for me😭😭.i can imagine that scenario
You described emotions and feelings..emptiness in her life without him very well dear..hats of to you..brilliant and i loved it from the bottom of my heart
Agar kuch aur kahungi na toh phoot phoot ke ro dungi
Btw keep writing..i would love to read another stuff of yours..but next time happy wala han..i always like happy endings
P.s. sorry for the late dear..i'm late just bcoz of exam🤢

I am crying yaar...too sad...my heart's breaking.. . can't stand it. Its so beautiful and sad

nooo! my eyes are red and swollen.. so beautiful and wistful! The way you brought out the power of fate from the very beginning till the end! how it overpowered them all and brought them together and how it cruelly snatched away everything all over again. But... the GOSO you created is more powerful! She takes all the thorns thrown her way by fate and yet she stands up inspite and despite, uncaring of her bleeding feet she treads on! She fights her demons every day and every night and yet she puts on a smile! that right there is a fighter and a winner... God often reserves the best battles for the ones most deserving and Gauri has always been her Shankarji's favourite.. Her faint smile at the forlorn night sky remembering her jatadhari reflects on how she decides to courageously fight on and not give up! cuz she knows and believes Om would never give up on her. And so GOSO remains... unbowed and undefeated. 👏

Ohhh... if I m talking abt ur writing skill .. it's just awesome n excellent ..

but so so much sadness in one point ..
tough to absorb it..

Keep writing .. Keep blessed

Originally posted by: LoveNakuulMehta

I don't really read Rikara stories but this is really nice. good job

Thank you. :)

Originally posted by: Ann17

Ohhh... if I m talking abt ur writing skill .. it's just awesome n excellent ..

but so so much sadness in one point ..
tough to absorb it..

Keep writing .. Keep blessed

Awwiee thank you. :)
And yep it was quite sad. Receiving lot of pms from ppl saying they are unable to control the tears. I feel terrible now.

Next OS will be a happy one. :)

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

You know what..I always like the "Happily ever after" type things..but you made me fall in love with this one...it's so heart wrenching yet beautiful..I'm just worst in expressing my feelings..and after reading this I really don't know how to make you understand how it felt..can't say anything more than that...kuch aur kaha toh pakka ro dungi...bass keep writing...
*HUGS*

Aww tasneem 😭
Thank you for falling in love with this one. :)
And what you wanted to say, I understood. :) ^_^
Will keep writing though I am pretty slow writer who loses inspiration very fast. 😆

Thank you for reading it. :)

Priya 🤗

Piyu :)

Big Hug Girl

Beautiful Writing

So touching so moving

Please aur likho