Tum Bin..! A RiKara OS - Page 5

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

Heartbreakingly beautiful
Wow wonderful OS even though a sad one
You described each feeling so wo derfully
Keep up the good work

Originally posted by: Priya_Iyer

Lakshu Di, 🤗

Thank you for loving it. Your appreciation means so much to me considering you have an inane understanding of RiKara both as a couple and as individuals. 😳

We never know what we have until we lose it. We should appreciate it, in the here and now. (Kal kya pata mile na mile, nazdeekiyan, O saathiya) this line manages to tear me up every time I hear it.

And the last four lines describes this OS aptly. :-) thank you for reading it Di. And next one pukka happy ending as demanded by most of the people here. 😊

Hugs

Piyu😳

Originally posted by: lakshmi32

piyu 🤗

@bold saathiya song lyrics is alwys close to my heart..past one year..i hear this song everyday before going to bed..i'm unconditionally and irrevocably fall in love with this song..

you know i love intense stories ..sad stories like urs is my fav ..every love story didn't have happy ending but still it will rule our hearts for ever like romeo and juliet,fault in my stars etc..

but still waiting for your happy end wala story..

Originally posted by: Priya_Iyer

Yes you are absolutely right Di. Sad stories tend to stay with us forever and creates a far more deeper impact.

I love all kinds of stories if the characters are complex and deep. Which is why RiKara appeal to me more than any other fictional couple. Om is so deep and complex that it boggles my mind. Gauri too, has many layers to her character. Pity, they aren't utilised to their maximum! We should stay put with our Imagination I suppose. :-)

And Saathiya song perfectly suits our intense and deep RiKara. The words, tailor made for them. :-)

Originally posted by: manny136

Ur writing is fab this was so sad but brilliant u could feel gauris pain i had to take a break in btwn reading this is so sad. Really lovely work keep it up.

Originally posted by: KrazyKripzy

Unres

Why did you make me cry?😭this was darn emotional! Gauri does not deserve this😭but this was very well written, i must say! I have only cried on very few fics in IF and this is one of em. well done❤️

Originally posted by: music1

Oh my my .. a beautifully etched creation of the most beloved couple...you are a fab writer Priya.. I could feel her pain through you writing...such a beautiful couple .. so delicate yet so strong ..no pomp and show yet takes your breath away every time they appear in front of you...Coming back to your creation..I could literally picturise Gauri living yet not living in his absence..Her pain , her loss.. felt so real.. Beautiful!!Kudos to you.. keep writing more:)loved it

Originally posted by: BIaddict

Piyuuu, I had no idea you had so much talent in you and man you are a damn good writer. Your play with the words is awesome and the writing is so gripping. But man, you made me cry. You killed my Omkara and Gauri's grief was just so unbearable to me. It was so so sad that she lost evrything in a minute. Now you have to cheer us up with a happy happy OS, you have no escape from us. Gve us another happy OS jaldi. In the mean time I m crying over this one😭and the sad ending my Rikara got.

Originally posted by: TheInkMistress

Priya di,

I have nothing much to jot... Just that I felt her pain as my own. You're a weaver of emotions. Always have been.

PS. It's a pleasant surprise to see you so active here. ❤️

Much love,

Radhika