Tum Bin..! A RiKara OS - Page 4

Piyuuu, I had no idea you had so much talent in you and man you are a damn good writer. Your play with the words is awesome and the writing is so gripping. But man, you made me cry. You killed my Omkara and Gauri's grief was just so unbearable to me. It was so so sad that she lost evrything in a minute. Now you have to cheer us up with a happy happy OS, you have no escape from us. Gve us another happy OS jaldi. In the mean time I m crying over this one 😭 and the sad ending my Rikara got.

Priya di,

Originally posted by: Gaurika17

Piyu :)

Big Hug Girl

Beautiful Writing

So touching so moving

Please aur likho

Thank you sumi. :) yeah will try to write more. :-)

Originally posted by: Spyngli

Diii...i cried...no words...itz heart touching...

Aww thank you dear. :)

Originally posted by: Z.A.A

Such a beautifully written OS! It's heart-breaking to see G suffering. I must have cried a river reading this😭

Thank-you for sharing this with us. Looking forward to reading more of your stories :)

Awwie sorry to hear you cried. :)

Thank you for reading it dear.

super

Originally posted by: Priya_Iyer

Adishree,

Love your comment. So so so wonderfully analysed.

I am huge believer in Fate, the Higher Power which can give and take as it pleases. So much fickle yet so so powerful.

Your description of GOSO is my own understanding of her.

GOSO's faith in fate is unshakable. Hers is something that will move the proverbial mountains. Her love for her husband, the love from her husband will always be her strength.
She fights her demons, gives in to the numbness, the darkness, the loneliness but she wont GIVE UP.. Ever. And there lies GOSO in all her glory!
Ananya had asked me to reverse the situation in my next write up, and i had been thinking what will Om do? The only conclusion i can come is Om would give up! Because for Om love would always be a weakness. Gauri will be his vulnerability! Om in this situation would either retreat in his mind going completely crazy or will chose to end it all. I cant imagine Om being what GOSO is in this OS. (this is for you Ananya)

Thanks for reading it dear. I immensely enjoyed reading your views on it.

Originally posted by: perFICtionist.

@bold: the GKS we know and the GOSO you created! they aint no quitters. be it for her mom or against kali thakur. She never gives up and that spirit is what made us all crazy about dabangRi! you brought that out ever so beautifully!

On that role reversal.. Om in my opinion would have retreated into a shell or more like an imprisonment in his mind. like the OSO @Kashish created in her series. Its his way of punishing himself according to his justice (black and white) he would probably never be able to forgive himself.

p.s. i am an ignominious sucker for happy fairytale endings.. so i would really not want you to write a roe reversal of this please?😆😳

Originally posted by: kashishsr

Ok heartbreak in a post courtesy of a fabulous writer. Take a bow girl... then hold your ears and apologise for making me tear up... then promise you'll do it again. Well done on this piece, it's so real. I'm devastated but you had me hooked from the first word. Only next time can we go for something a little more cheerful. You gave us a bittersweet melancholy in this... now how about some super sweet jalebi dessert of a happily ever after story? Your writing style seems flawless, so don't ever doubt it again. Keep it up, and thank you for the PM. Make sure to PM me next time you post anything too.❤️

Originally posted by: lakshmi32

i never ever get emotional while reading stories here..but today your story evokes such a emotional tornado in me.i still can't get over from it..this is fantabulous story piyu..you are an excellent story teller..

first i thought gauri left om because of om's hesistation to accept her..you described her emotions well..even i can feel her pain of lossing her loved ones.and living a life with just a memories of her beloved is too heartbreaking..but she is trying to hold herself and living her life without her loved ones support..but still she caged herself in a deep darkness..

one accident took everything from her...you nicely described rikara's liitle moments..their wait for holding their liitle bundle of joy.but fate have other plans..the way she is longingly looking that couples is too painfull yaar..she is right we will never give importance to what we have until we lost it..

piyu i can't believe that this is ur first story..you are a genius writer..u didn't made it over melodramatic..every emotions is so accurate..

THOSE WE LOVE CAN NEVER

BE MORE THAN A THOUGHT

AWAY..FOR AS LONG AS

THERE'S A MEMORY

, THEY LIVE IN OUR HEARTS TO STAY