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Posted: 7 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: bworm
Sad and sweet.
Nicely done.

Thanks a lot for commenting dear. 😊😊

It's a pleasure to know that you liked this.😃😃

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Posted: 7 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: Jennie.

@Rainzz:- their story didn't get 'happily ever after ' end.
And I'm glad for it.
Some stories are just not meant to end that way.
And this is one of them.
Glad, Annika chose her self respect over him. That was much much needed step.
Looking forward to read some more of your stories.

P.S:- Sorry for commenting late , ladies.
And that is why, had to include all the comments together.

Hey Jennie 😛,

Sorry for being so late in responding.

Honestly I myself don't like sad endings but here it was kind off necessary. 😊😊

Sometime you have to choose a path which may not come easy to you. 🥱🥱

She herself was really broken but she was strong enough to mend her soul in future.⭐️⭐️

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Posted: 7 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: vriddhi
hey!!
it's a beautiful post yaar... superb... too good... I'm glad that annika stood by her decision and took such a strong step... loved it yaar... plz do write something new... eagerly waiting for another update..

Thank you so much dear. 😳😳

I am glad that you liked this one - shot. 😊😊

I wanted something like this during the Daksh Track. But koi nahi... I wrote it here and found tripti.😃😃

Edit: Sorry for the late response .

Edited by Rainzz - 7 years ago

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Posted: 7 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: ithihaas
Rainnz,
I loved the shot and it was indeed beautiful...I loved that Annika is bold and inspite of loving him she choose to leave him for her self respect...
You have very beautifully described the Ras, sadness... I could feel more Annika's sorrow... Fighting with your heart is not easy and for 2 years the paib she has gone through and still undergoing is so heart wrenching..
Loved the initial lines that you have written...

Hey Rohini😳,

Thank you so much for the appreciation dear. 😊😊

I am happy to know that you liked this one-shot. 😛😛

Sometime we need to suppress our desires as they can provide pleasure to you for sometime but will cost you heavy for the rest of your life.

Her love for him was deep but not as the need if Self-Respect. The love that leaves you hollow should be avoided. 🥱🥱

Honestly, I must confess that I love your analysis about any piece of story. And this analysis of yours is not an exception.😳😳

P.S.: Sorry for being so late in responding to the reply .😭😭

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Posted: 7 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: Nimik
Was it too good!!!
Nah!!!
It was 👏 👏
TOOO Good!!!!
Loveddd it!!!

-Shikha

Thank you so much for the appreciation, Shikha.😊😊

I am glad you loved this shot.😳😳

Plus, sorry for being late in replying back.🥱🥱

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Posted: 7 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
well written..

Thanks a lot for the appreciation dear. 😳😳

P.S.: Sorry for being so late in responding to the reply.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: samiksha1993

Rainzz:- I Need Me, Can there be a greater truth? One who fails to rise for him/herself can never rise up to anyone else. It takes a lot of courage to accept sadness as a lifelong companion and show compassion towards one's own self. You brought out Anika's compassion not only for her self but also for her brother. Such a short write-up up but with such beautiful deep undertones.Kudos!

Hey Samiksha 😳,

Thank you so much for the appreciation dear. 😳😳

I am really elated to know that you liked this. 😊😊

The basic concept was that you don't need anyone to mend your soul but yourself. You are sufficient for yourself. Even if you have your own failures, you will slowly rise above them. ⭐️⭐️

Leaving what you love is not easy but sometimes necessary.

P.S: Sorry for the late response. 🥱🥱

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Posted: 7 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: coolhi1988
Shot 3 very nice...
Well written
Anika.left Shivaay wen he put a blame on her character...
She promised to never return though she missed him.but dint return with him even wen he came to get her...
Nice...
I hope if u can write a story on this concept...
Like Anika's resolve of putting her self.respect above all
& Shivaay asking for her forgiveness...
Plz it's a request

Thank you so much for the appreciation dear .😳😳

I am glad that you found this shot nice.😛😛

Here, in this shot her self-respect was above all, even above her love for Shivaay. So she didn't returned.😊😊

@bold: Please don't request dear.

Honestly, I don't have any plot closer to this concept in my mind. If anyday, I would have one, I will surely write.😃😃

P.S.: Sorry for delay in replying back.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#89

I dunno if its the place to ask and I lpved the concept of Navarasas and its incomplete i mean four more yet to be done. Seeing Soumya's character in the starting year of IB as calm composed which made us love her and right now if she negative, she should be atleast be strong and come out clean. Umm so can i request if someone thinks Rumya can be numbered for Shringara and Bayanaka.

Bayanaka can be seen in Rikaras way too. The Gouri who was all innocent seeing tej conducting her final rituals while om standing silently. Gauri who is is always shant becomes kalimaa and giving OM vasis a much needed peace of mind. Every mem even Dadi too.

My opinions on this 2 emotions, if you think they are eligible I'll more than happy.