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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

@lazy I really thought it was annika because of bete ki

but then her excitement of her boyfriend i had a doubt that it's gauri...

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

@Annika

awesome update yar...

Ya anger had the power to destroy everything...

and about rikara...om still doubts her... he is doing the same mistake again and again... I really don't think this time gauri will forgive him

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Khidki

@Khidki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
@Annika
awesome update yar...
Ya anger had the power to destroy everything...
and about rikara...om still doubts her... he is doing the same mistake again and again... I really don't think this time gauri will forgive him

Thank You Aparna .🤗

Exactly Anger can destroy everything in no time.

Yes. The last line said it all. Only ashes remained. Ashes if their hearts and relationship. 😭

Edited by annikaa - 8 years ago

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Aisha

@Aisha.K

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Oh God what an amazing update <3 although I don't want him to misunderstand her again which will lead to their separation but i loved your take on rikara its as intense as rikara Im in for this only if cvs handle it in correct way

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Srivalli

@Srivalli.t

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Very beautifully written dear..soo emotional..

Loved it..

Om really deserves that slap...how can he say such cruel words to her even after being with her for so long, he still can't see her pure heart n love..he is really blind..

In his anger, he is destroying their life..

I really wonder how can he still doubt her even after knowing her for these many day...she always stood by him in every situation n in return he even can't trust her forget about love..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#56

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kaavya009

@kaavya009

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Posted: 8 years ago

#57

Read all of them in one go. Awesome and beautifully written 👏

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@BoonAndBane

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Posted: 8 years ago

#58

Res 😛

Unres 😊

This was too amazing. 👏👏

The anger was too raw. I just loved it❤️. Both have their own pains and their own anger. But Omkara's anger is because of misunderstandings and Gauri's c'ouz of humiliation and tiredness. 🥱

My favourite line: " Hai. Tukdon mein pda hai. Judne laga tha, phirse bikhar gya. " ❤️

Edited by Rainzz - 8 years ago

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Shaina744

@Shaina744

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Posted: 8 years ago

#59

Hi Anni...
This one is really too good..
Omkara doesn't trust Gauri where Gauri trusts him blindly... She was always there for him...
You wrote so beautifully.. Really loved it..tnq so much for the pm..